Monday, March 7, 2011

I Love the way I wear this hat!



I Love the way I wear this hat!
What others think I have no care;
They call me vain! How do they dare?
My love for life they do not share;
Will gossip change their heart of that?
They call me vain! How do they dare?
I Love the way I wear this hat!
What others think I have no care!

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011

triolet excerise at One Stop Poetry - I followed the Classical form Shan displayed
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19 comments:

  1. Kat MortensenMarch 7, 2011 at 8:03 AM

    Love it! Quick, crisp and clever!

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  2. Kerry O'ConnorMarch 7, 2011 at 8:13 AM

    I like the way you have mixed up the form in your own dynamic way (also love the hat!)

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  3. knot eyeMarch 7, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    nice...I like the feminine voice / feel here...it fits the image very well, her pensive yet sure posture

    Peace, hp

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  4. MontyMarch 7, 2011 at 8:32 AM

    lol great work, dear lady. and you caught the essence of triolet much better than I with the lighter feel :)

    Monty / bum

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  5. Brian MillerMarch 7, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    smiles. it does look rather nice...fun play today...

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  6. TashtooMarch 7, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    I wouldn't dare! I think the hat suites you well :) Perfect little triolet, and a wonderful share too...Thank you

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  7. AnonymousMarch 7, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    This is a perfect little trilot and very fitting to the history too! You've written i'n simple but effective iambic tetrameter, must say I loved it!

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  8. MarshyMarch 7, 2011 at 10:53 AM

    i love the way...you wrote the triolet...great tale...and this was so you with the hat...cheers pete

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  9. JL DodgeMarch 7, 2011 at 11:02 AM

    Like the poem, but I thought the Triolet was an eight liner... no matter you did a really nice job !

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  10. UnknownMarch 7, 2011 at 11:07 AM

    amazinggggggggg! I love the way ya wear that hat too :)

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  11. PennyMarch 7, 2011 at 11:50 AM

    Great fun. Love it.

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  12. Kenia SantosMarch 7, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    And I love the way you use your words. This was very much fun to read, and it's very bold! Both the pictures and the words talk about women who are daring!

    Kiss you girl!

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  13. hedgewitchMarch 7, 2011 at 3:14 PM

    I love the way you wear it, too. Nice little triolet, and just the right subject for one, something that calls out for a simple but entertaining/meaningful statement..and I'm certain that's exactly what the lady was thinking.

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  14. Julie Jordan ScottMarch 7, 2011 at 4:05 PM

    fantabulous!! Have you ever seen the play "Sunday in the Park with George"? Now I am humming the memorable, "Finishing the hat" song. I love IT, too! And you reminded me of Magpie.. so many thanks to you I am feeling redundant but then again, is gratitude ever redundant, really?

    My Triolet

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  15. rmpWritingsMarch 7, 2011 at 5:49 PM

    i'd wear that hat...

    love the feel and rhythm of your words. beautiful.

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  16. EllaMarch 7, 2011 at 6:10 PM

    Great pic and the poem fits! I love the choppy rhythm, it fits the tone~

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  17. RJ ClarkenMarch 7, 2011 at 6:10 PM

    I love this! It's such a statement! ☼

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  18. BeachannyMarch 7, 2011 at 7:22 PM

    Excellent. Enjoyed it very much Barbara. Gay

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  19. SheilaMarch 9, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    how fun! great triolet, too.

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