Monday, March 7, 2011

I Love the way I wear this hat!



I Love the way I wear this hat!
What others think I have no care;
They call me vain! How do they dare?
My love for life they do not share;
Will gossip change their heart of that?
They call me vain! How do they dare?
I Love the way I wear this hat!
What others think I have no care!

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011

triolet excerise at One Stop Poetry - I followed the Classical form Shan displayed

20 comments:

  1. Love it! Quick, crisp and clever!

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  2. I like the way you have mixed up the form in your own dynamic way (also love the hat!)

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  3. nice...I like the feminine voice / feel here...it fits the image very well, her pensive yet sure posture

    Peace, hp

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  4. lol great work, dear lady. and you caught the essence of triolet much better than I with the lighter feel :)

    Monty / bum

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  5. smiles. it does look rather nice...fun play today...

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  6. I wouldn't dare! I think the hat suites you well :) Perfect little triolet, and a wonderful share too...Thank you

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  7. This is a perfect little trilot and very fitting to the history too! You've written i'n simple but effective iambic tetrameter, must say I loved it!

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  8. i love the way...you wrote the triolet...great tale...and this was so you with the hat...cheers pete

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  9. Like the poem, but I thought the Triolet was an eight liner... no matter you did a really nice job !

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  10. amazinggggggggg! I love the way ya wear that hat too :)

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  11. And I love the way you use your words. This was very much fun to read, and it's very bold! Both the pictures and the words talk about women who are daring!

    Kiss you girl!

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  12. I love the way you wear it, too. Nice little triolet, and just the right subject for one, something that calls out for a simple but entertaining/meaningful statement..and I'm certain that's exactly what the lady was thinking.

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  13. fantabulous!! Have you ever seen the play "Sunday in the Park with George"? Now I am humming the memorable, "Finishing the hat" song. I love IT, too! And you reminded me of Magpie.. so many thanks to you I am feeling redundant but then again, is gratitude ever redundant, really?

    My Triolet

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  14. i'd wear that hat...

    love the feel and rhythm of your words. beautiful.

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  15. Great pic and the poem fits! I love the choppy rhythm, it fits the tone~

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  16. I love this! It's such a statement! ☼

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  17. Excellent. Enjoyed it very much Barbara. Gay

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