a tree grows in Brooklyn
not for me, my friend
my days have reached a number
marked nearer than near the end
yet, I have played king
too a pauper, The
Bard's Othello
recited Yorick's cold bitter end
and alas, a tree grows in Brooklyn
but not for me, my friend
this heart has
held the moment, the pause
applause, ovations that knew
not end
but now, all lighting has gone dark
the castle walls collapsed
within
and still a single tree does grow in Brooklyn
for someone, not me dear friend
as the sits have
long been empty, curtain
lies as worn out thread, and no
more for me parts are offered, but in the one last
more for me parts are offered, but in the one last
undertaking - of
Rosencrantz and Guildenstern
are Dead
are Dead
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011
wow, excellent references as well as reflections on this photo prompt.
ReplyDeletebtw, the stylish blogger award looks stunning on the black background :) hope you have a beautiful sunday!
Sheila
I liked reading this aloud. :-
ReplyDeletelovely piece, Barbara. I really like your refrain lines that come back to haunt us every so often.. repetition as device is oen of my favourite and you play it well here.
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Luke @ WordSalad
What a wonderful response to the picture prompt. Sad and nicely done. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, was great to hear you read your work via the podcast :)
ReplyDeleteNow that I've been privy to even more info about you, I find the Tree Grows in Brooklyn reference intriguing given where you grew up and where you currently reside. As a novel, it is one of the saddest i've read and reminds me of a dear friend who grew up in Brooklyn under similar circumstances. Pairing your words with Smith's novel, and the prompt... heavy for me to read. Emotional and well written. Cheers
Bravo! Standing
ReplyDeleteovation. I clap
my hands and
stamp my feet.
really lovely...poor yorick i knew him well, but i am much happier to know your words...nice pick up on the tree...not many have...
ReplyDeleteNice poem and it works well with the prompt. Always enjoy reading your works.
ReplyDelete"All the world's a stage..."
ReplyDeleteI am standing next to Andreas, clapping, clapping, clapping. Beautiful, poignant and brilliant in its word selection.
Brava!
Barb, I love everything about this.
ReplyDeleteThe rhythm is smooth and I love the
book, "A tree grows in Brooklyn".
Pamela
Fun, serious, excellent-reference work. Classic, in many ways.
ReplyDeleteMesmerizing response to the prompt...a truly gem piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteYour writing does have a very classical feel to it......beautifully done, Barbara. I loved the book so much in my early teens.........enjoyed the references throughout your poem.
ReplyDeletebrilliant! great take on the One Shoot. i have a love for repetition, especially as you have done with the small changes.
ReplyDeletedani
This is beautiful, B.K. The photo deserved a soliloquy, and you wrote it.
ReplyDeleteI think, perhaps, my most favorite so far. So smooth, as though already written, edited, and rewritten. perfection found as a result. Honest, touching, felt :) If prizes were rewarded, I dare say you'd have claimed them all!
ReplyDeleteas so many times, I've had to say "to one better than I" love the depth and perceptions with such rich allusions. you are good, woman :)
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