Monday, November 7, 2016

on que

Your arrival was full of expectation
A gem of consequence
Waiting in circumstance and bullet holes

You did not disappoint nor
Take hostages - laid out your
Agenda, turned the page

Everything done, said
Right on cue - unable to hold you off
I danced alone

bkmackenzie
2016


d'verse prompt 11-7-16

13 comments:

  1. "You did not disappoint nor/Take hostages" -- this is such an intriguing line. There is a deep story here. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of it.

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  2. Like a war... it comes to an end... no hostages or anything

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  3. One can assume warfare to be heartless and so act on cue.

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  4. WHAT A SURPRISE! Nicely done (and meaningful)

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  5. Sometimes dancing off alone is our greatest decision.

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  6. War...stark choices...vulnerability...solo dancer...I enjoyed...Thanks.

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  7. I enjoyed this--full of mystery, meaning, familiarity
    janice (ontheland)

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