Your arrival was full of expectation
A gem of consequence
Waiting in circumstance and bullet holes
You did not disappoint nor
Take hostages - laid out your
Agenda, turned the page
Everything done, said
Right on cue - unable to hold you off
I danced alone
bkmackenzie
2016
d'verse prompt 11-7-16
A gem of consequence
Waiting in circumstance and bullet holes
You did not disappoint nor
Take hostages - laid out your
Agenda, turned the page
Everything done, said
Right on cue - unable to hold you off
I danced alone
bkmackenzie
2016
d'verse prompt 11-7-16
"You did not disappoint nor/Take hostages" -- this is such an intriguing line. There is a deep story here. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much De...bkm
DeleteLike a war... it comes to an end... no hostages or anything
ReplyDeleteLove /war it all has an ending ...bkm
DeleteOne can assume warfare to be heartless and so act on cue.
ReplyDeleteYes sometimes war is internal. Thank you...bkm
DeleteWHAT A SURPRISE! Nicely done (and meaningful)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Martin...bkm
DeleteSometimes dancing off alone is our greatest decision.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gayle...bkm
DeleteNice ending!
ReplyDeleteWar...stark choices...vulnerability...solo dancer...I enjoyed...Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this--full of mystery, meaning, familiarity
ReplyDeletejanice (ontheland)