i
there is a garden
there is lantern - unlit
table, too saint
consumed in their dying
i live in its shadow, its thorn and its berry
i dance with the ant
seek wisdom from the worm, as
the veil of my longing is known only to morning
the moss and the fledgling
laugh at her caul
i am loved by
the ivy, my mother mused virgin - concealed
she is skirted in creme and in dew
she nurses my foresight - she kisses my brow
not window would
find me, not line, not a word
i am given to the garden, given yet
denied, with
the veil of all longing known only to the morning
feathers once flown
laugh at the wind, as
i would delight in the still,
aware of leaving - dealt
the unborn
the shroud of my breath
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2013
van Gogh 1889 - Tree with ivy in the Asylum Garden
really wicked flow bk...
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i dance with the ant
seek wisdom from the worm, as..
ha, there is wisdom to be had of both of them....
the unborn shroud of my breath....wow..nice close too...
Thank you. Brian I am hoping to extended this write...bkm
ReplyDeleteWow. Really gorgeous. Every bit of it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jenny for your kind words...bkm
Deleteif we wake in the morning, longing, what does that do to our day?
ReplyDeleteWhere is the Food when mother is not?
My favorite part is stanza 2 -- dancing with the ant and seeking wisdom from the worm. I do think we can learn so much from attending to the teachings of the 'lesser' creatures. And it is no small thing to be loved by ivy! Smiles.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary...bkm
DeleteThis is such an interesting and complex poem. I really like it, but I have to read it a couple of times to get the fullness out of it.
ReplyDeleteThere is something so satisfying in the rhythm. Not straight flow, but syncopated?
Really like this one. Different, fresh, original.
Lady Nyo
Thank you very much Lady. I appreciate your take on the piece -you being an accomplished poet ,,.bkm
DeleteBeautiful piece!
ReplyDeleteThank you Annell...bkm
Deletethe rhythm of this flows beautifully... i hear the earth speaking in this one and was looking for more...
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DeleteThank you very much Patrica...bkm
Deletenot window would
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These are the lines that speak clearly to me. A feeling of complete isolation, whether chosen or imposed. I read and re-read in order to better understand every intimation and nuance. Not an easy read, but filled with vivid imagery.
Thank you Kim for taking the time to read between the lines ,much appreciated...bkm
Delete"the veil of all longing known only to the morning
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laugh at the wind"... beautiful, beautiful!
Thank you very much Laura. I am glad you enjoyed it... bkm
DeleteBeautiful ....
ReplyDeleteyou make some most beautiful connections, and use such original and thoughtful imagery: creme, caul...
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