Tuesday, April 30, 2013

obsidian and amber




lest i forget
the moment, the radiance
of sky
obsidian and amber, plum-blue
ash against my door

lest i make
the day hold you

awake i will
to light longing for rain

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2013
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5 comments:

  1. Brian MillerApril 30, 2013 at 5:09 PM

    smiles...a light verse...lovely visuals...
    and if its rain you want...i hope you get it...

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  2. Lorna CahallApril 30, 2013 at 6:16 PM

    Lovely and delicate. Ditto on the rain.

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  3. steveroniApril 30, 2013 at 6:37 PM

    Don't look for rain...
    "red sky at night,
    sailor's delight."

    Unless you want to keep your man home on a rainy day, that is...SEE? how my mind goes on and on? Cannot stop it. "STOP IT", I say!
    PEACE, Barbara!

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  5. annell4May 7, 2013 at 8:35 AM

    Loved this piece! Beautiful as always!

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