Wednesday, January 2, 2013

adequate ink


it was a
three pack a day year
it was the
ringing in and the
wringing out of days left over
butted against
borrowed mornings

it is the
marking of a new
calender - two packs
two packs - one day at a time year

it is the burning
of thoughts against a night
of writing - two packs
just does not produce adequate ink
and a year unproductive

just is not acceptable
ashes to ashes

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2013

Posted for Magpietales

9 comments:

  1. the burning
    of thoughts against a night...love this...i used to smoke a lot between age 14 (yes sadly..) and 18... then stopped and some nights woke bathed in sweat, dreaming of cigarettes...ugh...cool write bkm

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  2. very tight very cool and very authentic

    Cold Turkey was rough, but it worked for me.

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  3. "wringing out of days left over" says it all- excellent

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  4. There was a time...and you remember. As always a wonderful write.

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  6. ah, the addiction...good descriptives...enjoyed this.

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  7. but dust to dust it must be...

    a single word from you...alone...is "adequate ink"

    am missing your voice...

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    1. my gnome friend - I have been hiding as of late but miss you too...i promise a return ..i promise..bkm

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