Monday, June 4, 2012

wanting





i want
to eat of you naked and raw
in the face of a summer
sun
i want to feel
of your skin still flesh and
new

curl, consume
conquer and crown

i want to dry
to warm with you in loving

and be sweeter
for it

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012

24 comments:

  1. Woo-Hoo! I meant WOW! H O T !!!
    Nicely done, Barbara.

    Been missing you! and I suspect you'll
    eat also the flowers? (Those ARE flowers, right?!)

    Hope all is OK in your life, Ma'am!
    Peace!

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    1. Thank you Steve I have missed you too...been busy but hopefully back ...bkm Peace to you..

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  2. How you managed to make something so deliciously erotic from this image is truly amazing!!!

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    1. Thank you Helen...all of life is worth tasting....bkm

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  3. I love your take on this pic Bkm! So sensual, and delightful. Beautiful writing! :-)

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    1. Thanks Carrie...good to hear from you...lol always..bkm

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  4. It would be wonderful if we all became sweeter after being with the one we Love, but, we do.

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    1. Yes we would..love should not be bitter...bkm

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    1. Thank you Tess...look for you post every Sunday morning with coffee..thank you...bkm

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  6. oh, yes - and to be sweeter for it. Nice work!

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  7. oo la la...this is deliciously intimate...just perfect for a summer day...

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    1. Love is always perfect on a summer day Brian...thank you..bkm

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  8. Consume, conquer, crown - who could ask for more?

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    1. No on really could ask for more than true passion...thank you...bkm

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  10. Yes - "and be sweeter / for it" - just lovely. Concise and evocative.

    Richard

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  11. Beautiful and sexy... I like!!

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  12. I should have written this :-) Smiles, love the sensuality here ~

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  13. I think this was just marvelous...and it is inspiring me to go write some more....but this time, not about veggie men!

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  14. Your verse thrusts it's sensuality right into the summer sunshine and brings me there with it. Thank you for sharing this. I love it, Barbara.

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