Monday, June 4, 2012

wanting





i want
to eat of you naked and raw
in the face of a summer
sun
i want to feel
of your skin still flesh and
new

curl, consume
conquer and crown

i want to dry
to warm with you in loving

and be sweeter
for it

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012

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23 comments:

  1. steveroniJune 4, 2012 at 10:18 AM

    Woo-Hoo! I meant WOW! H O T !!!
    Nicely done, Barbara.

    Been missing you! and I suspect you'll
    eat also the flowers? (Those ARE flowers, right?!)

    Hope all is OK in your life, Ma'am!
    Peace!

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    1. signed...bkmJune 4, 2012 at 4:42 PM

      Thank you Steve I have missed you too...been busy but hopefully back ...bkm Peace to you..

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  2. HelenJune 4, 2012 at 10:39 AM

    How you managed to make something so deliciously erotic from this image is truly amazing!!!

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    1. signed...bkmJune 4, 2012 at 4:43 PM

      Thank you Helen...all of life is worth tasting....bkm

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  3. Carrie Van HornJune 4, 2012 at 11:47 AM

    I love your take on this pic Bkm! So sensual, and delightful. Beautiful writing! :-)

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    1. signed...bkmJune 4, 2012 at 4:43 PM

      Thanks Carrie...good to hear from you...lol always..bkm

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  4. AnonymousJune 4, 2012 at 11:48 AM

    It would be wonderful if we all became sweeter after being with the one we Love, but, we do.

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    1. signed...bkmJune 4, 2012 at 4:44 PM

      Yes we would..love should not be bitter...bkm

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  5. Tess KincaidJune 4, 2012 at 11:48 AM

    Sexy and delicious...

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    1. signed...bkmJune 4, 2012 at 4:45 PM

      Thank you Tess...look for you post every Sunday morning with coffee..thank you...bkm

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  6. Tumblewords:June 4, 2012 at 12:42 PM

    oh, yes - and to be sweeter for it. Nice work!

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  7. Brian MillerJune 4, 2012 at 1:02 PM

    oo la la...this is deliciously intimate...just perfect for a summer day...

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    1. signed...bkmJune 4, 2012 at 4:45 PM

      Love is always perfect on a summer day Brian...thank you..bkm

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  8. BerowneJune 4, 2012 at 3:20 PM

    Consume, conquer, crown - who could ask for more?

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    1. signed...bkmJune 4, 2012 at 4:46 PM

      No on really could ask for more than true passion...thank you...bkm

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  9. The UnknowngnomeJune 5, 2012 at 1:51 AM

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  10. The UnknowngnomeJune 5, 2012 at 1:52 AM

    Such a delectable edible...

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  11. Mr. WalkerJune 5, 2012 at 6:49 AM

    Yes - "and be sweeter / for it" - just lovely. Concise and evocative.

    Richard

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  12. Laurie KolpJune 5, 2012 at 9:06 AM

    Beautiful and sexy... I like!!

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  13. ScarletJune 5, 2012 at 5:04 PM

    I should have written this :-) Smiles, love the sensuality here ~

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  14. 21 WitsJune 5, 2012 at 6:54 PM

    I think this was just marvelous...and it is inspiring me to go write some more....but this time, not about veggie men!

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  15. UnknownJune 5, 2012 at 7:53 PM

    Your verse thrusts it's sensuality right into the summer sunshine and brings me there with it. Thank you for sharing this. I love it, Barbara.

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