the face
or phases of a world
imitates life
a branched elm or
elderberry is not alone
in duplication
of the cosmos--press thought
to leaf, page to pen
inked, blotted
that
glass weeps to center
sanctifies
water dies still
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012
Magpie tales
i like that this part feels a bit backwards
ReplyDeletepress thought
to leaf, page to pen
inked, blotted
and water dies is an interesting thought too...
Very thought-provoking poem, Barbara. I agree with Brian about your line "water dies still"; your use of the word "still" has several possible meanings there.
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