pull the walls away
stone wash the sky - slice thoughts diverse
as towers of babel fall; "a prism
bends no light" so the blinded
say
stone wash the sky - fells
the rain blue and i - pull
the walls away - between scenes
of loving you
a pail stands half full - thrown syllables
of the day - simple affairs
wet the lips - i pull the
walls away
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012
Magpie Tales - Post
i pull the walls away between scenes of loving you...nice..glad its half full and not half empty as well..smiles.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Keep pulling those walls away, bkm! Thank you.
ReplyDeletelove the title, lovely idea to openness.
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Love the concept of pulling the walls away! This is stunning Bkm!! :-)
ReplyDeleteI also love the concept... and love the way it sounds, makes me think of the "Yellow Wallpaper." Beautiful!
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