Saturday, January 14, 2012

January Moon




it January
and the moon has fallen
head first, head first into
the night to sit quietly on my lap - a white rabbit
finds no followers
in his frostbit, unfed sleepy world , this is an unknown lesser meaning
of the winter - where gossamer wings
can not fly - where zephyr winds die quickly, dying
unheard - winter is that forbidden
side of living; with snow
leaving his fingerprint
on my open window - winking at the moon
to the beat of a quiescent
human heart

i seek only
to comfort this pale
allowing forbidden estate, a room in my presence; for
together we will query the righteous
and call the waxen
to rise

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012

6 comments:

  1. lovely imagery with the moon bk...i find her rather fascinating myself...winking to the moon to the beat of the heart is a cool touch...

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  2. I was fascinated by that moon, too. You use her beautifully: "winking at the moon/to the beat of a quiescent/human heart." Wow.
    Thank you.

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  3. Top notch! "i seek only to comfort this pale
    allowing forbidden estate,"

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  4. wonderful poem. the flow is so powerful.

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  5. Ohhh love this line "winking at the moon
    to the beat of a quiescent
    human heart"...the whole poem is exquisite!

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  6. "winter is that forbidden side of living;" - WOW! I love that line. So many images evoked from this.

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