i never knew my great uncle
in his youth, never knew
what he did for a living, or saw him
tie his shoes
i only knew him by his laughter
his wit, his sarcasm and twinkled eye, only knew
his aged walk and candor - only knew
him as my grandfather's
older brother
together they could fill
a room, gather an audience
no charge, no tickets
no back stage pass - lucky i thought myself as
a child able to move closer
steadily between legs, between pastel printed shirts, between
gossip and an off balance
center table, til
up i looked at him, this uncle
sitting on a tall
wooden stool, his elbow on the bar
his hat next to his beer - that
is how i know him
i could not know his childhood
my grandfather's brother - together
in suits and ties, in hats
with brims, in vests with memory lined pockets
tied shoes -
calling out tales, first one
then the other, proud and pronounced
they sat
bar-stool to bar-stool
"You" this and "You" that
"He" this and "He" that,
a woman moved to sit down, ordered a Seven-Up
seemingly familiar in scene
as hat to hat,
as beer to beer
these old men sat
filling the room
as only laughter can
on a warm Sunday afternoon
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011
my Great Uncle Mike ( in picture) poem of how I remember him
posted for dVerse Open link night
Hi! you're great uncle was a cool dude huh? a great tale of memories here.. :)
ReplyDeleteWarm, heartfelt memories! Thanks for sharing sweet friend, I felt like I was in the room with you. (Hugs)Indigo
ReplyDeleteI felt like I was there. Well written indeed.
ReplyDeleteGreat job weaving memories in verse, quite the guy it sounds like.
ReplyDeletesmiles...nice...pockets lined with memories...you set the scene nice an i was ready to sit down and listen...
ReplyDeleteWhat fond and beautiful memories you have filled your post with today, Barbara. Loved these lines:
ReplyDelete"...as hat to hat,
as beer to beer
these old men sat
filling the room
as only laughter can
on a warm Sunday afternoon!"
Yes, I too have lived these same Sunday afternoons, and you've brought back to me the whole 'show', even those smells--the oldness, the beers, the laughter.
THANK YOU. And PEACE!
such fun and beautiful memories. Wonderful write :)
ReplyDeleteGreat combination of warmth and story-telling.. really enjoyed the pace of this piece and felt the atmospheres you describe.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem! Reminds me of my grandpa. I never saw him with his brother, but he could fill a room and many hours with his stories and jokes. Miss him dearly.
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You conjure the scene and the feeling so well. My dad and his brother were story tellers like this, so I have yet another reason to like your poem.
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