Thursday, June 2, 2011

observations






as  a cattle car moves
without thought, a tree
holds onto its last branch with three leaves
life has been taken over
with words touting the undead

i am but observer, yet i too
have death awaiting; an elderly dog
stares into my eyes asking, Today?
all appears out of balance, as rope
drawn tight in front of me
i am overcome by fear

one misplaced step
a bed of rocks, or a bed of roses
i can not discern
from this height

the rhythm of the morning
is greeted by a chirping nest of fledglings
and sunlit shadows crossing
a now vacant room - having lived
and died many times over, i still find
the darkness uncomfortably
quiet

there is movement
in the kitchen - the old dog
wants to be fed
hope holds it own, the first fledgling
takes flight

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011

4 comments:

  1. This is so beautiful and moving, bkm.......the old dog, the fear of whether one will land on a bed of roses or rocks......yet the hopefulness of the morning sun and the fledglings, and the old dog waiting to eat. Life, continuing on.

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  2. Yes I have an old one and her days are coming to a close...but as long as she keeps getting up and eating all is right for the day....blessing Sherry...bkm

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  3. wow this went here there and everywhere in the imagery...death will find me when it is ready, until then...well...

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  4. A beautiful write... stirring questions about life, death and all that is in-between. Until the time comes, we move forward and search the empty darkness for the mornings food.

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