Saturday, June 25, 2011

dust jackets




we settled
on words that could not
be repeated - meeting
between
the history and fiction sections
of our lives; we

exchanged
library cards, letters
with keys
attached - a bobby pin
fell between a
hard cover
and dust jacket; you took
note
offering
a palm reading

should
I remove the
jacket pinning down
words prefaced


bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011

15 comments:

  1. between the history and fiction sections of our live...mmm...nice line...and the prefaced part at the end...very nice bk

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  2. oh i esp. loved the first stanza - settled on words that can not be repeated..history and fiction section of life - great

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  3. Life and history in terms of a dust jacket - absolutely brilliant analogy. Love it! (Hugs)Indigo

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  4. I have to go with Indigo, it is a brilliant analogy. Yes, remove the dust jacket & release those words...

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  5. Love this... histories full of dust jackets created by ones life.... wonderful.

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  6. "between
    the history and fiction sections
    of our lives"

    My word, that's beautiful.

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  7. Besides your talent of composing poetry, you have a true poetic sense also either in your selected quotations or the shape of your blog. It seems you are made of "poesy". Congrats

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  8. Fabulous allegorical piece, B...
    I always learn and love here!

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  9. It is very odd but I seem to be having trouble posting my comments today on quite a number of sites. I post but they dont show up - has blogger disappeared me? I swear I commented on this this morning, bk.........it is fantastically good, as always........"between the history and fiction sections of our lives"........

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  10. Wow I really loved that first stanza, this is an amazing poem and I very much like your unique style

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  11. Oh, this is wonderful...

    "we settled
    on words that could not
    be repeated - meeting
    between
    the history and fiction sections
    of our lives;"

    I really enjoyed this.

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  12. Mmm... this is so beautiful and with captivating images. Love how the opening drew me in.

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  13. abstract on the first stanza, well done.

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  14. I really enjoyed this immensely

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  15. brilliant!

    especially love ~

    "between
    the history and fiction sections
    of our lives"

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