because, i believe in chaos....
Beautiful.. I love the way the words are falling, perfect match for the image. :)
Thank you Anthony...always like your input...bkm
Delicate flow of words. Lovely.
This was beautiful; really enjoyed it~
Yes it is a dance, a Sufi swirl of sweet-bitter words here, the naiads and the sicklemen about their dance within the margins of a poem. "Neotreic sweat" is such a strange, interesting phrase, suggesting a new trope or turn on old themes, arising or rousing from some Catholic (I use that broadly) slumber. The entire stanza is pure peaches. Fascinating ... wonderful. - Brendan
Yes, I love the words with the image!
So beautiful, and I especially love "Rumi dances." Wonderful poem!
This poem was so evocative! It swirled like the dancer and the movement was fluid and fascinating. Word theatre.
Love the way this whirls, on the page and in the reading. Thank you.