Monday, January 10, 2011

Pretend


trust matters
in any type of faith -  even pretend
so, should I
choose you my god
for a day - wrap you willingly in the toga of my bedsheets
it must be real - this trust thing , of abiding in one another -(you in me -
me in you) - it can not be any other way - especially, in
pretend

bkmackenzie
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15 comments:

  1. Brian MillerJanuary 10, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    smiles. i want a bit more than pretend...nice write...

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 10, 2011 at 3:23 PM

    Ha! good one!

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  3. UnknownJanuary 10, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    A very good one!

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    it cannot be any other way... definitely

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  5. FireblossomJanuary 11, 2011 at 5:12 AM

    Oh, I lkike this.

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  6. FireblossomJanuary 11, 2011 at 5:13 AM

    Like, I meant! I love my new netbook, but I am still adjusting to the smaller keypad!

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  7. Myrna R.January 11, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    This is so lovely. Spiritually sensual - what a combination.

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  8. SuziCateJanuary 11, 2011 at 9:59 AM

    Trust is everything in everything. love your twist!

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  9. RJ ClarkenJanuary 11, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    Trust does indeed matter - even in pretend, What a marvelous poem.

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  10. joannaJanuary 11, 2011 at 9:31 PM

    Gorgeous write,, deeply moving we all need more trust our relationships at work, home, country to country even trusting more in "God" then our small self.

    Truly lovely,

    joanny

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  11. GlynnJanuary 12, 2011 at 2:40 PM

    Trust is such a fragile thing, too, easily broken, easily disappointed, especially when we choose a "god for the day." Like this a lot, B.K.

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  12. PattiKenJanuary 12, 2011 at 5:28 PM

    Sometimes it works best in pretend. Less betrayal there.

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  13. SheilaJanuary 12, 2011 at 8:51 PM

    yikes! we give away so much when we only pretend for the sake of comfort and harmony...I feel saddness and empathy for this soul...

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  14. budh.aaahJanuary 14, 2011 at 7:32 AM

    This is so beautiful BKm

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  15. Kathe W.January 14, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    in the toga of my bedsheets...love that!

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