trust matters
in any type of faith - even pretend
so, should I
choose you my god
for a day - wrap you willingly in the toga of my bedsheets
it must be real - this trust thing , of abiding in one another -(you in me -
me in you) - it can not be any other way - especially, in
pretend
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011
smiles. i want a bit more than pretend...nice write...
ReplyDeleteHa! good one!
ReplyDeleteA very good one!
ReplyDeleteit cannot be any other way... definitely
ReplyDeleteOh, I lkike this.
ReplyDeleteLike, I meant! I love my new netbook, but I am still adjusting to the smaller keypad!
ReplyDeleteThis is so lovely. Spiritually sensual - what a combination.
ReplyDeleteTrust is everything in everything. love your twist!
ReplyDeleteTrust does indeed matter - even in pretend, What a marvelous poem.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous write,, deeply moving we all need more trust our relationships at work, home, country to country even trusting more in "God" then our small self.
ReplyDeleteTruly lovely,
joanny
Trust is such a fragile thing, too, easily broken, easily disappointed, especially when we choose a "god for the day." Like this a lot, B.K.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it works best in pretend. Less betrayal there.
ReplyDeleteyikes! we give away so much when we only pretend for the sake of comfort and harmony...I feel saddness and empathy for this soul...
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful BKm
ReplyDeletein the toga of my bedsheets...love that!
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