Tuesday, October 19, 2010
The Road
upon the road
I came across a paper
written, typed – some parts, illegible
the paragraphs and incomplete sentences
indicating someone
had passed away
where, now –
that was all unclear
the part that was clear
was the grief -the pangs of loneliness
left behind for the bearer
this torch fate now handed to me—
why me?
clutching the words as if
an orphaned child
I ran and ran
the torch burning
I repeating, “don’t cry, don’t cry”
to who?
a piece of paper
there was no one - just me -
and the road - and the words -
we cried together
bkmackenzie
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This is beautiful...from such a simple premise you have written something with a deeper meaning.
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem.
The universal pangs of grief in a broken world.
ReplyDeleteA road weeps with all of us at times.
that you weep for one you do not even know speaks volumes...smiles.
ReplyDeletelonely yet beautiful!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful, revealing a tender heart of compassion. Love it!
ReplyDeleteBarbara,
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful and the ending is so powerful.
Pamela
thanks Sherry and Pam...this is an older piece but I have always liked it....glad you did too...blessings...bkm
ReplyDelete"Just me - and the road - and the words - we cried together." A strong image, so filled with feeling. Beautifully crafted!
ReplyDeleteI like to look at paper I find when I walk, but haven't found anything quite like this. Strong poem, entering into someone else's sadness, not knowing whose...
ReplyDeleteThis is more than a poem, it's a poetic cry from the heart. Extraordinary work.
ReplyDeleteThis is really finely written. You continue to impress.
ReplyDeleteThat's beautifully expressed. Grief knows no boundaries, no borders.. it's just the same language.
ReplyDeleteDearest bkm,
ReplyDeleteIn my state of mind, your poem sings to me. And the note from my heart to yours.
I have not cried once, perhaps it is time to cry now.
Great poem - I'm there on that road.
ReplyDeleteI like the part about passing the torch - I wish more people could feel those ties to the past, even those not of our personal history. Nice piece, BKM!
ReplyDeleteOh this is just so beautiful. That universal empathy that joins us if we allow ourself to feel. This was a really wonderful piece of writing and it 'touched' me.
ReplyDeleteI think I have a new favorite of yours...this is amazing Bkm!! :-)
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