because, i believe in chaos....
forever is like ... never mindbrilliant
The quiet surrender, the word play is dynamic coupled with the photography makes the whole piece one gorgeous read. "I could taste young marigold honey" ~ Love that line.
love it! there was none on my table as well - but - guess i feel the taste of morning coffee, honey and forever on my tongue…yeah - i definitely feel it
Not on the table.... but everywhere aroundBeattiful!;)
This was truly wonderful !!! loved this :)
That's odd...this appeared on my blog list a day or so ago, but when I tried to see it, it wasn't there. Now it is. Oh well.This has the feel of something from decades ago. Maybe it is the accompanying picture, but I think it is more than that. I really like it.
All the honey you taste does not come from bees!Lovely.
very deep. I liked that :)
sweet,it hits home,coffee, tea, love, and more...very heart warming piece.
What a wonderful play on words! I love the picture you've chosen to go with it--perfect!
Wow wonderful~~~~I love it =3 sweetness is everywhere when there is love!=3
This is the stuff love is made of. Gorgeous, bkm.
saying yes to forever...the mundane and thenuminus connect in your poem and bring forth a moment that transcends...um...hmmm...everything!
A lovely image-- the surprise of the taste. But I can't tell if it is disappointment or satisfaction at the end...
Ah! That taste of honey... Perfect.
Nice photograph apt to your poem.well done
forever.. ah, thats a tricky word.. sort of... nice image and verse! :)My Potluck & Monday's Child
Both lovely and full of love. Nice work, bkm. Poem on ... Happy potluck!
Great read. EnjoyedWarmest SaladLuke
Oooohh...how deliciously romantic!! Sometimes, certain words said at a certain time, in a certain mood, do indeed have a "certain" lingering effect.. :)Very nicely written, bkm... Thank you for linking this lovely poem with poetry potluck!! It's our pleasure to have you here!
Wonderful read! =)-Weasel
Beautiful... 'Nough said. Love and Light, Sender
Happy Wednesday,Thanks for linking up with poetry potluck.I hope that you have some fun!cheers!BEST!
Let our imagination satisfy the crave of our senses. Love your piece.