Sunday, August 15, 2010

Remain



lacking sail
here i will remain
in paradise

bkm

Posted for One Shoot Sunday

10 comments:

  1. Interesting the implication that if you had a sail, you might well go.

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  2. nice. simple. but then paradise is isnt it...smiles.

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  3. Hi BKM..i so love the "less is more" saying..captured so well by you here...i kinda of let out the longest sigh when i read your words..thanks for that Pete

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  4. I'm with Brian . . . but I feel the 3 neat lines could be developed into a longer poem. (Doc writing other poets' poems for them again! STOPPIT, DOC!)

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  5. surprising - i just think the other way round....it's so interesting to read the different poems of this picture prompt...

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  6. Very clever thought! That was awesome ...bkm. Thanks so much for sharing!

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  7. Minimalist, micropoem. Excellent. Indeed if we could only find that paradise on earth :). Good work. Thank you.

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  8. Lovely haiku and nice shot of the boat...in Sausalito? Looks like it.

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