Wednesday, June 28, 2017

i love the color red





i love the color red
so i carved out a window small
with a shard and stone, placing
outside the window
a rose red guarded by her thorns

i placed a field of sweet purple clover distant
but not so very far away, and a
road marked by worn gravel and a
line of wooded pine

i walked the field of clover
and the road along the pine
gathering up a memory and wrote
it in a book - so

that i could visit that very window
where the rose had grown
red forever blooming
guarded by her thorns

untouched or knowable
in the window of my wall

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2017

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10 comments:

  1. Interesting return. Many have a flower, untouched, beyond...

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  2. I think we do need that innermost flower well shielded... love the approach to the red red flower.

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  3. It is good that it is written in a book and can be revisited again and again! Great write!

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  4. Photographing or writing something helps the memory which I assume is one of the windows in one's wall.

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  5. The point of view both from the interior and exterior produced a vast image, in time, space and the consciousness.

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  6. I admire your perspective of the color red and the rose ~ A metaphor for all things we hold dear in our hearts ~ Happy summer ~

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  7. A beautiful tribute to what we guard within.

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  8. I think you meant carved not craved. You are a rose

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  9. OOPS replace the t with an r lol

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  10. Wonderful metaphor, Barbara. I love to return to those meadows and flowers that I hold in my memory bank.

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