Wednesday, March 22, 2017

self reflection











pen me your soul/ mirror
me your love/ touch my reflection/ to
read me your want

self that I know you/ that
you I can speak/ mirror me your
heart/  these secrets
                                   you keep

self
/mirror me your heart/ these
                           secrets you keep

bkmackenzie
copyrighted (2017)

Poets United Mirrors



 
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15 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 22, 2017 at 12:55 PM

    I love "mirror me your heart / these secrets you keep".

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  2. Sanaa RizviMarch 22, 2017 at 2:04 PM

    This is soo passionate.. so intense ❤️

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  3. Myrna R.March 22, 2017 at 2:19 PM

    To me, this reads like a reflection of self-love - a love poem to the self. Lovely.

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  4. MaryMarch 22, 2017 at 4:40 PM

    You have really made a strong statement here.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 22, 2017 at 6:07 PM

    Magically expressed.

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  6. signed...bkmMarch 22, 2017 at 7:17 PM

    Thank you Martin...bkm

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  7. SusanMarch 22, 2017 at 9:06 PM

    We should--as you do--ask first for ourselves before we ask for another. Imagine our selves answering yes and giving back the love! Very fine!

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  8. Rosemary Nissen-WadeMarch 22, 2017 at 9:47 PM

    So beautifully written.

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  9. Sumana RoyMarch 23, 2017 at 1:50 AM

    "mirror me your heart" oh so difficult to get to it sometimes...love the line breaks...

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  10. UnknownMarch 23, 2017 at 8:24 AM

    I love the love that for the reader is a continuous circle. A beautiful reflection is this!

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