Wednesday, March 22, 2017

self reflection











pen me your soul/ mirror
me your love/ touch my reflection/ to
read me your want

self that I know you/ that
you I can speak/ mirror me your
heart/  these secrets
                                   you keep

self
/mirror me your heart/ these
                           secrets you keep

bkmackenzie
copyrighted (2017)

Poets United Mirrors



 

15 comments:

  1. I love "mirror me your heart / these secrets you keep".

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    1. Sometimes we do not even know ourselves...bkm

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  2. This is soo passionate.. so intense ❤️

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  3. To me, this reads like a reflection of self-love - a love poem to the self. Lovely.

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  4. You have really made a strong statement here.

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  5. We should--as you do--ask first for ourselves before we ask for another. Imagine our selves answering yes and giving back the love! Very fine!

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  6. "mirror me your heart" oh so difficult to get to it sometimes...love the line breaks...

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  7. I love the love that for the reader is a continuous circle. A beautiful reflection is this!

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