I hold the pigment of my skin
in a cup bowled
and full
the rain subsides
and I am clean
there is room for words
and wallpapered
windows of drought
(seeking) see-ing
(seeking) see-ing
en-light-en-ment
(the art of not giving a shit)
breathe once
breathe once
sip and sound the rounded cup
I am full
the rain ends
I hold my skin
all color absent
and I breathe once
abstaining from all graces
breath-e
once more in faith I write
on the walls standing
beside me
I am clean
and the sound of rain
follows
bkmackenzie
2017 (copyrighted)
Wonderful flow of a moment
ReplyDeleteI like your parenthetical definition of enlightenment :-P
ReplyDeleteI like some think that makes me think. Good read here, and to quote Martin "Wonderful flow of movement"
ReplyDeleteWow! Perfect!
ReplyDeleteZQ
The art of not giving a shit... Perfect... we need more of that.
ReplyDeleteAmen.
DeleteMan, this is awesome!
ReplyDeleteI especially like this section:
"
I hold my skin
all color absent
and I breathe once
abstaining from all graces"
Yes, I liked your definition of enlightenment too. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteEntitlement: you took the word right out of my mouth. It is the bane of humankind - and then, there are times when it is flat-out terrifying. An important piece. Great writing!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!!
ReplyDeleteYou know the art of not giving a shit is much under-rated.. we are arriving to.. you define it beautifully here
ReplyDeleteen-light-en-ment
ReplyDelete(the art of not giving a shit)
Enlightened and being informed. One holds out on one's own and are not distracted by others!
Hank
This reminds me of, "The Yellow Wallpaper." I love it!
ReplyDeletei read "the yellow wallpaper" directly after reading this poem also.
DeleteA wry observation on the nature of enlightenment. The line breaks really do support the meditative feel in the piece.
ReplyDelete'...en-light-en-ment
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Cool definition. :-)
O to be, to cup, to breathe, to write and allow thought, then listen. I find this a soothing meditation.
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