i held four dreams
in one hand, a plate
of promise in the other
i heard the words of a fallen sky
that fell upon the floor
a plaster face, a worn tongue
that held open every door
i could not wake
less or more - i could not
hear the cry
a harbored thought came over me
without a place to hide
the faded shore, the
labored breath, the rock now lifeless sand
and at a pause i postulate
the crossing in this place - that knows
not time, nor lies, nor hate
only a destiny and space
dreams are pure
held with a thread
as promise held the same
though one be right, one unknown
conscience holds the key - as now i turn
through every dream - await a given light
pen prayer of peace for clarity
as a night now slips to night
bkmackenzie
2016
Poetry Panty - Poets United
dream on fair maiden
ReplyDeleteand with this kiss I thank you
Thank you Martin...bkm
ReplyDeleteThe first three lines just grab me - and the last stanza - I can see that thread being careful woven and tested ... intriguing poem.
ReplyDeleteDreams vs. promises. A very deep write.
ReplyDeleteI love the metaphor of that 4 dreams and your ending line- pen a prayer of peace for clarity ~
ReplyDeleteThanks for joining us at OLN ~
I, too, love your first three lines and the last stanza.
ReplyDeleteThis is just amazing.. are there empty wishes or a wish in a dream, reminds me of the proverb "a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush"
ReplyDeleteA most beautiful haunting write.
ReplyDeleteDreams sometimes hold promise...
Kind regards
Anna :o]
conscience holds the key - as now i turn
ReplyDeletethrough every dream - await a given light
That is true! Dreams are pure but somewhat complicated but one hopes for the best in reality!
Hank
This has a mysterious feel to it and there appears to be a puzzle within these dreams. Sometimes we never can figure out the meaning but other times I've found very clear messages for me.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good.
ReplyDeleteI think this hits me the hardest:
"i could not wake
less or more"
dreams are pure
ReplyDeleteheld with a thread
as promise held the same
though one be right, one unknown
Beautiful lines!!
As always so beautifully done! "Night to night."
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your opening lines! Brilliant! Such a wonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteThe title and premise seem etched in the teller's psyche...such that it feels not just prophetic but perhaps inevitable? There is so much you offer us in the shadows between the thoughts and lines.. May she pick the brightest dream
ReplyDeleteFour dreams in one hand....what a gift that would be.
ReplyDeletevery well penned indeed
ReplyDeleteAwesome!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Dreams and promises - a fascinating expression of that which lifts our hearts - and that which crushes us. Wonderful writing!
ReplyDeleteworn tongue
ReplyDeletethat held open every door... goodness, what images you weave! Lovely!
"...this place - that knows
ReplyDeletenot time, nor lies, nor hate
only a destiny and space"...I am feeling almost breathless at this place...so powerful words...
It has an incantational feel which is very effective.
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