"dialect requires its own room"
my words
where wall and word meet
and shaded moments are covered in downplay and stereo-type
my thoughts
"retro" you said, "lets do retro"
i stepped up to meet your expectation
you stepped out to meet a contemporary
dialect remained
cornered by two marbled
cat-eyes
set in ceramic Siamese
cracked and deemed beyond
repair
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2013
intersting how you use dialect as an object in this....pretty cool closure too, the broken cat watching over it...
ReplyDeleteLiking the words, and the dialect, Barbara. And yet, I had a hard time thinking of "dialect" as an object of atoms/protons, neutrons, electrons. Not critiquing this--it is MY failing to think that everything has to be a concrete object.
ReplyDeleteYOU and Stephen King, my Dear!
SWEEEET!
It's like talking to a wall sometimes.
ReplyDelete("where wall and word meet")
Dialectic words and thoughts and others often remain beyond repair.
And let's not forget the Minnesota dialect. :)