Sunday, December 16, 2012

we do give exception


because i love rain, and
you
i have come this way
and the trees that
have not come this way before
today  follow
and i let them without question,  as i
let you love me un-questioned,  so too
the rain

we do  give
exception to  rain,  to its
loving of wind,  and its movement
in loving and i would love
this way - as wind, as the
rain loves us and  too the
trees today

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012

posted for Magpie Tales 

9 comments:

  1. Yes, there is some beauty in the compromise. :)

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  2. let you love me unquestioned....like rain...smiles....nice....i rather like the rain...nice allusion to it...

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  3. I so enjoyed reading your atypical sequencing and inferential tone. Really lovely piece.

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  4. Something so unifying about this..sheltered by wild nature...a lovely picture.

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  5. Beautiful idea of loving like the rain with its wind and movement!

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  6. Ah unconditional love this is beautiful Bkm! :-)

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  7. Without restriction this comes with feeling

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  8. It is pretty absorbing. Lyrical rain, almost!

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