i know the light
of these windows, the
first frost of
this grass
there is never separation
from self-knowing
never respite from memory - sited
the movement
of vixen and wing are sensed like storm
the filtering of leaf
from shadow is directly
logged as new
these woods
still shelter my heart, their words
recorded by season
the northern sky
lights as snow marks
my step
there will be
conversations tonight and
the matching of fire, there
will be dreams as
one gathers the remainder
of all laughter before
emergence of
fate, and
awareness of today
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012
posted for Magpie Tales and Open Link Night
I was raised on a farm surrounded by the woods of central Minnesota...this painting takes
me home...bkm
nice...really like that last stanza and the stand alone line bk....there is a comfort and a tension wrapped up in those short lines that is very real...
ReplyDeleteAwareness of today... the best kind.
ReplyDelete"these woods
ReplyDeletestill shelter my heart, their words
recorded by season.."
Your words, just lovely. I too, know of woods like these. I love this setting that you have painted with your words!
goodness this is wonderful...every word..x
ReplyDeleteLovely...I like the pairing of vixen and wing...
ReplyDelete"These woods still shelter my heart"...what a beautiful thought and line Bkm....and I am with Brian that last stanza is amazing! :-)
ReplyDeleteHi, again. I'm still in awe.
ReplyDelete"there is never separation
ReplyDeletefrom self-knowing
never respite from memory "
I wish that weren't so...
love the ending line, very deep. emergence of fate and awareness of today, really nice. Built up to the end great, excellent write. Thanks
ReplyDeleteLovely. I especially liked this verse:
ReplyDeletethese woods
still shelter my heart, their words
recorded by season
the northern sky
lights as snow marks
my step
I love the idea of an emergent, burning autumn-- it so pulls on the senses-- and the originality of language and syntax here--
ReplyDeletethe movement
of vixen and wing
Lovely autumnal nostalgia...
ReplyDeletei love the feeling of persistence in this poem, the gather of strength before pushing forward. very well done, enjoyed very much
ReplyDeleteMore words than I am used to reading from you, but still very tight and nothing wasted. An excellent full read outloud. Like driving toward mountains in the distance and watch them rise. I like the momentum this piece creates. And, before the emergence of fate, is outstanding/classic and why you are my fav.
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