i am sitting between bare walls in
a dream slowly dying here, a page
refuses to be turned, a chapter finished
somewhere i heard there is new
life there, but all has stilled and though
calm is welcome chaos proposes crave
a night does not throw its own light; a
night of worn thought does not pose sleep,
nor rest -and the bird black shimmers unseen
new seasons gather their own dust, layers
placed on a page so willingly noticed and
i hear there is new life there chapter-ed
is daylight a goddess, an omen of willows
movement? - listen to the coming of a
footstep, a breath, a sound of wanting, want
i am sitting between a chapter and a
dream now dying. the day remains quiet and
silently speechless - it is now autumn, it is
and there is no need for chime, the cradle
sits empty and the gifting of pages
has sipped its last cup of summer wind
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012
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'the gifting of pages
ReplyDeletehas sipped its last cup of summer wind'
..my oh my..i so adore these striking lines...and a gentle autumnal melody tinged with melancholy that your poem creates...beautiful, truly, and resonating~
thank you so much, I so appreciate you liking this piece...bkm
DeleteStuck between the two, is a place many have been and will be, whether a book or the season.
ReplyDeleteso true Pat thanks for stopping in...bkm
DeleteYou never fail to amaze and inspire me...such a wonderful poet.
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thank you Unknown...I am happy to inspire and I appreciate your kind words....many blessings...bkm
DeleteBeautiful poem, “is daylight a goddess,” “the bird black shimmers unseen,” and many more. Nice imagery.
ReplyDeleteIn a day there is a time
To fill the silent caves
Where thoughts nurture,
Dormant for just
A moment more.
Thank you Frank...especially for your lovely response...a day holds so many lifetimes within it of light and dark of sound and of silent...bkm
Deletethis really resonated with me, i am turning 50 this year, and so many of these lines spoke to me of the autumn of life.
ReplyDeletelovely.
Mrs...I am glad you could relate...time has a way of opening different views about our life...thank you...bkm
Deletewhew...there is a hardness to this...its evoked even in the first stanza...a stuckness in that place between a dream and reality....
ReplyDeletenot as hard as i would say thoughtful..reflective on where life has been as where it may go from here....bkm
Deleteand there is no need for chime, the cradle
ReplyDeletesits empty and the gifting of pages
has sipped its last cup of summer wind
Yes, a matured way of accepting a transition without surprises. Nicely, bkm!
Hank
Thank you Kay...the gifting of pages is something we see forever fruitful even in silent transitions... unexpected...bkm
DeleteI like to think of all my days like wilting leaves,at nightfall it does too and when the sun rises again I am an empty branch with only a bud ready to start its growth. A lovely telling of this give to change in the journey, allowing the experience is such a beautiful thing. Lovely write ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteThank you C.Rose...I do so appreciate your beautiful comment...it is a journey isn't it....bkm
DeleteI believe I have been there also, Barb. Every day is new, even as we turn with the coming season, just beautiful.
ReplyDeletePamela
Thank you Pam...for your kindness...bkm
Delete"new seasons gather their own dust"..."there is no need for chime"
ReplyDeleteSo much wisdom in this beautiful piece. But some sadness, too. I do love your writing. Thank you.
Thank you ds...I love your comments...you inspire me really...thank you...bkm
DeleteFantastic, especially the closing lines, which made me catch my breath....summer wind.....
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherry...so good to hear from you...I have missed you....bkm
Deletetoo many amazing lines to quote, each stunning on its own. i had to read once focusing on each line before rereading as a whole. the word that comes to mind is exquisite!
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My Heart..thank you for your wonderful comments...I am so glad you enjoyed the read and rereading...I do appreciate your words, thank you...bkm
DeleteA beautiful piece...much enjoyed. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading and commenting...bkm
DeleteI too feel the melancholy as I drift in your dream.
ReplyDeleteThank you my friend...thanks for stopping in...bkm
DeleteBeautiful poem-- gorgeous images throughout...xxxj
ReplyDeleteThank you jen...bkm
DeleteLove sitting between a chapter and a dream, and-
ReplyDeletenew seasons gather their own dust, layers
placed on a page so willingly noticed and
i hear there is new life there chapter-ed
Thank you Laurie your words are always appreciated...bkm
DeleteGorgeous poetry...I love the descriptions you use, especially that last line...melancholy & lovely
ReplyDeleteThank you Louise....blessings...bkm
Deletealways a sucker for your seasonal verses. I luv the unique way you write. Its so interesting
ReplyDeleteMichael..thank you for the lovely comments...they encourage and inspire...bkm
DeleteSo Beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteWe've all found ourselves in this space, between what was, and waiting to become - and yet not being able to turn that page, not able to bloom into fullness. But the seasons do change, and there will be a time when you will be able to move into the next chapter.
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