i.
i need a chair
and 6 pieces of paper
a wall to write on - a full moon hanging
from a peeling window
come soon before the sun
blinds us to what
we have written
ii.
i have decided
against the burgundy shades
there are so many stories below- people moving
i want to join them, but
there is an unmade bed
and burgundy
is guarding the door
iii.
will you sit next
to me like a warm tidal pool
it is good to be wet - you and i, we
were born mer-mates
counting on pearl stars
so afraid to
be human
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011
so afraid to be humen...tight line...the second makes me think of corso's vermillion a bit...burgundy guarding the door...smiles. the first though i love...really nice textures to it...
ReplyDeleteHow could one not say yes?!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed all three, but am especially drawn to the third. Mermates-love that word.
ReplyDeleteAn interesting read - thanks!
ReplyDeleteI love this line...
ReplyDeletea full moon hanging
from a peeling window
and the ending...
So afraid to be
human.
Well done bkm.... :)
It can be scary to be human. Nice piece.
ReplyDeletenice! love the cadence to the ending - yes! aren't we all "so afraid to be human"
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