Today: I will stand firm in my conviction to
view the day in only 3-dimensions. Today: I will
see the world in full color, Kinemacolor, Cinecolor and Technicolor
accompanied by full surround sound and digitally kinetic . I will
embrace the beauty of yellow and red ceramic dishes, teacups, and
a dirty dog's dish. I will dive into the waters of cleanliness
and a bucket of floor wash.
Today: I will not Write
Today: I am stronger and able to face my demons, a black in white
typed, ink driven world of chaos and will move forward instead as Hoover
and I become one with the blue-grey carpet. Pledging to dust
all wood and organize each and every book referenced.
Today: I am not going to Write
Today: I am free of addiction- I am clean of compulsion, facing
the green shower curtain Dragon, the unrelenting Cyclops latrine
head on and sailing the through tumultuous seas
of Grail transformation.
Today: I am going to try not to Write
Today: I will move towards the light with frantic pace to avoid these
compulsive, obsessive defects appearing in the dishwater, churning up
in Scrub Bubbles and being whispered to my ear by a seductive
Mr. Clean, that I then am able to rest in evening's twilight
Today: I am going to Write very little
Today: I if I hurry I can get in one Turner Classic Black and White, if I
go faster I can find a respite to type a few notes. Today: Dimensions are
multiplying faster then before and the Cyclops is rebelling, I fear being
swallowed whole.
Today: I am going to Write
Today: I will Write......Yes, Write now!!!!
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011
Giggles... you made me laugh. THANK YOU for that!!
ReplyDeleteAnd today, I am writing, baby. You better believe it!
oh, I know this feeling. I was at the eye doctor this morning waiting for almost 2 hours and thinking...don't you know I have to go home and write before the kids come back from school...geez!
ReplyDeletehaha, this is so nice! that Mr. Clean is a handsome seductive fellow...
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and write you did...ha. what a delight to read...yeah i cant imagine a day without writing...even just a little...
ReplyDeleteI am managing to get some cleaning in...in- between writing......thanks for commenting...bkm
ReplyDeleteright now write now... you've written it all for a poet makes art with words that only a poet
ReplyDeleteGreat, B!
YOUR are so right to write~ I loved it, great imagery, fun to read~ You are clever!
ReplyDeleteI so love this! So funny! I think we all need cleaning ladies - hey, I AM one! What's wrong with this picture?
ReplyDeletelove the spirits.
ReplyDeletewell done.
Brilliant write , so glad you did write today, this is a classic piece of poetry. Very eloquent.
ReplyDeletejoanny
I love liquid manifestoes, where chaos and the rage to order get a chance to sing their parts ... where inner and outer life can share a raucous beach! -- Brendan
ReplyDeleteI love this! It reminds me of how I always tell myself that if I just do a bit of cleaning then I can reward myself by writing. Suffice it to say that the dishes have been abandoned to the kitchen sink and the Hoover is dusty. Write on!
ReplyDeleteah yes! Write on! Excellent!
ReplyDeleteOkay, I was skeptical when I saw you link up One Shoot Sunday within like 30 seconds lol, but your poem works well and is very creative. Great poem about being a writer, bkm.
ReplyDeleteI know Dustus...but I wrote this one just this week and fit well - so thought I would link it in...and give it a little more exposure....thanks...bkm
ReplyDeletelove it! i gotta say, when the muse calls there's nothin' to do but write.
ReplyDeleteoh this sounds so familiar...great job...love, love, love this...
ReplyDeletePoetry, addiction, writing ... and the old rusty trusty typewriter! I've already commented on the poem above, but I wanted to add that JackAZ's picture for Sunday's picture challenge couldn't fit better with your poem's rant. I can hear those keys smack smack smacking away with passion, frenzy and greed! - Brendan
ReplyDelete...and a white flag wavers, surrender needed...
ReplyDeleteglad you gave in...HA...I foresee a National Holiday...Pen and Paper Day
Peace, hp
Today, I am going to read your poem, and say I loved the drama you brought to it, today I am going to say nice one, and you are blessed with the gift of the word...
ReplyDeleteHa! Brilliant. The cyclops thing has me a little freaked out. Two writes don't make a wrong dear. Enjoy a day of color.
ReplyDeleteLOL! get out of my head, woman!
ReplyDeleteHahaa cleaning I could do with a cleaner, and an actual brain that will detach with little hands to write things for me. Great creative freeverse Bkm xxx
ReplyDeleteSeing an old dusty Royal typewriter -- and understanding all the words and emotions that flowed from it -- and how all of that becomes a restated commitment to write. Good poem, B.K.
ReplyDeleteYou are so in my head on this one... probably many of our heads... It's right to write, but so often pulls me away from other things, especially mentally.
ReplyDeleteWonderful post-LMAO. Love the progression of resolutions dissolving into our universal need to spew those words. I have vacuuming to do...later.
ReplyDeleteExcellent piece in all ways, and what a neat quirk of fate to get the photo for it after the fact.
One of your very best. You've certainly got the write stuff right here!
ReplyDeleteAh... The magnificent lure of the "ROYAL". love it.
ReplyDeleteBarb, an amusing piece that starts out with
ReplyDeletesuch affirmation and ending with resignation.
I write every day myself. I can't seem to stop.
I used to be that way about painting, but now
the pen is in charge.
Pamela
Fun back n' forth work with great imagery and attitude.
ReplyDeleteWrite now I have thoroughly enjoyed your writing. Thanks much for sharing your wonderful talent with us mere mortals.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very different approach. I enjoyed it very much.
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