primary place, place-meant-poised, poised primal
wan-ing
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wax-ing
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fixed finite, in-finite flight
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bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011
any feedback welcome here on this piece
(working on some abstract pieces)....bkm
you have done some nice things visually with this piece...i like the river of letters...the gap in align allay...(im) mobile...the visuals tak us on as much a journey as the words...
ReplyDeleteThis poetic sculpture consists of carefully equilibrated parts that move in response to the breath of voice. A beautiful capture in words and thought of the pictured mobile.
ReplyDeleteLove the visual and the fluidity!
ReplyDeletewow, amazing! Love the visual effect of this...the first I have seen from you like this. Very impressive, bkm.
ReplyDeleteYes it is! Wonderful!
ReplyDeletethis is so free and it flows beautifully...I want to touch it and hear it clink :)
ReplyDeleteI have a friend who makes glass mobiles :)
This is extremely clever! Visually striking, and makes the mind work to keep up with the meaning. Wonderful, bkm! You clever girl!
ReplyDeleteBarbara,
ReplyDeleteYears ago I thought Calder pointless, frivolous. Now I recognize the shapes and particularly the balances, moving balances.
Yes. Quite taiji, Tai Ch'i.
Trulyfool
first time seeing you do shape or creative poetry.
ReplyDeletewell done.
I am very impressed.
:)
I love this piece! The words themselves are great, but the way you arranged them on the page makes them amazing. Bravo.
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ReplyDeleteHad to fix my typo!
ReplyDeleteFabulous fluidity. Really enjoyed reading this one. Form and content are exceptional. Really creative.