Sunday, February 6, 2011

Speculating Dream - Haiku


falling into light
speculating flight in dream
rainbow bleeds all night

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011

Posted for One Stop Poetry: Sunday

photo by:Sean McCormick you can see more of his work at
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19 comments:

  1. Julie Jordan ScottFebruary 6, 2011 at 3:21 PM

    This is gorgeous. Love the words and the images. Thank you.

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  2. dustusFebruary 6, 2011 at 3:32 PM

    Your poetic lines combine to form a beautiful dreamscape.

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  3. TashtooFebruary 6, 2011 at 3:58 PM

    rainbow bleeds all night...love this line! And how fitting considering the image. Wonderful take on a fantastic photo.

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  4. Gigi AnnFebruary 6, 2011 at 4:03 PM

    Love the line 'rainbow bleeds all night' sweet dreams.

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  5. Brian MillerFebruary 6, 2011 at 4:34 PM

    nice..love that last line...

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  6. Kristen HaskellFebruary 6, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    What a fantastic picture to go such a rich Haiku!

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  7. hedgewitchFebruary 6, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    Freefall into light, meteorites burning and rainbows bleeding. Expressive and sharp images.

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 6, 2011 at 6:09 PM

    Beautiful! Love the elegant simplicity.

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  9. Lavonne February 6, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    I loved the image and the Ku...Wonderful :)

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  10. GlynnFebruary 6, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    It is like a rainbow, bleeding. Nice one, B.K.

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  11. Beverly AnnFebruary 6, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    Lovely dream image - I'm imagining what a rainbow bleeding would look like.

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  12. budh.aaahFebruary 6, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    What a great Haiku.3 powerful lines

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  13. KavitaFebruary 7, 2011 at 1:08 AM

    Few words - a world of fascinating imagery!!

    Absolutely LOVELY!!

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  14. FireblossomFebruary 7, 2011 at 5:05 AM

    Poor rainbow. :-(

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  15. Tammie LeeFebruary 7, 2011 at 8:23 AM

    your words take me out of the norm
    leaning into the feelings of existence
    magic

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  16. Kat MortensenFebruary 7, 2011 at 9:00 AM

    I love the use of the word "bleeds". What a photograph too!

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  17. ClaudiaFebruary 7, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    ohhhhh - i like the bleeding rainbow..

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  18. MargaretFebruary 7, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    Rainbow bleeds. You nailed it!

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  19. CatyFebruary 7, 2011 at 6:19 PM

    powerful haiku

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