thin lines
I watched you trace the pages,
methodically
following the faded design -
your hands; the thin bones of your wrist, your fingers long, narrow
unlike I remember –
across your face, thin lines draw bookmarks; years written
on thin lines, contrasting the new paint
on a blank wall
I trace the lines with my hand,
retrieving a smile; eyes
simulate recognition – one thin line
connecting a fading past
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2008
Posted for the
Poetry Pantry at Poets United......
a very intimate piece...tracing those thin lines...each one has a story...
ReplyDelete"Years written on thin lines" -- I like that. Aging is not for the faint of heart.
ReplyDeleteAh yes, hands... we all adore them (unless they are our own, LOL). A very well done poem!
ReplyDeleteI like "thin lines draw bookmarks"....lovely nostalgic loving poem.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful piece of writing!
ReplyDeletePamela
this is so very vivid and strong,
ReplyDeletelove your image, it tells a beautiful story.
I like the combination of looking and then touching. Like a child might do to a grandparent and then ask those innocent questions. What? Why?
ReplyDeleteNicely drawn, b.
ReplyDeletea memory written into one's face -- nice connection
ReplyDeleteThe hands are so expressive but are also an accurate measure of aging. I like the move from hand to face to smile. A sensitively written poem.
ReplyDeleteLove this! Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThis was so lovely, bkm. A moment shared and beautifully expressed. The details are gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and intimate. I miss my Grandma...
ReplyDeleteBut never forget what is written between the lines- a whole different story...
ReplyDeleteI just love this one Bkm!...it is full of beautiful lines! :-)
ReplyDeleteleaves much to wonder about the stories those lines tell. Nice job! Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteI love the lines, those in your poem, and those the poem speaks of,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth