because, i believe in chaos....
a very intimate piece...tracing those thin lines...each one has a story...
"Years written on thin lines" -- I like that. Aging is not for the faint of heart.
Ah yes, hands... we all adore them (unless they are our own, LOL). A very well done poem!
I like "thin lines draw bookmarks"....lovely nostalgic loving poem.
A beautiful piece of writing!Pamela
this is so very vivid and strong,love your image, it tells a beautiful story.
I like the combination of looking and then touching. Like a child might do to a grandparent and then ask those innocent questions. What? Why?
Nicely drawn, b.
a memory written into one's face -- nice connection
The hands are so expressive but are also an accurate measure of aging. I like the move from hand to face to smile. A sensitively written poem.
Love this! Thanks.
This was so lovely, bkm. A moment shared and beautifully expressed. The details are gorgeous.
Beautiful and intimate. I miss my Grandma...
But never forget what is written between the lines- a whole different story...
I just love this one Bkm!...it is full of beautiful lines! :-)
leaves much to wonder about the stories those lines tell. Nice job! Enjoyed it.
I love the lines, those in your poem, and those the poem speaks of,Elizabeth