because, i believe in chaos....
nice hermes reference...had so many jobs i wonder which one is delinquent...smiles. good job writing anyway. nice one shot...
That was something to read. Nice job. I am new at Poets United. A pleasure to find poems like this. I'm Square Corner. My friends call me SC
"thoughts weep from the stone wallstaining the mosiac" love that line ...bkmAnd agree with Brian about the Hermes reference. Excellent poem, conjures many ideas and images in few lines.
"thoughts weep from the stone wall....." Good poem!
Beautiful message dear signed...bkm,profound and simply penetrating the mind..love it :) well done!
nice oneshot bkm
You captured so much in so few words, bkm. The Hermes line just adds the perfect touch to the scene you so artfully crafted.
Wonderful. I read it out loud. Twice.
Oh the pain of writer's block..thoughts weeping, blank pages, dried up pens..know that and been there..the urge to walk away and wonder if any of it is original or fresh. Good poem. Very evocative. Thanks.
Some excellent lines in this one. And it is something that afflicts many writers so often.
So jealous now! You write real good, my friend. ;)
Hermes has gone missing....really nails it! Brilliant!
Love this BKM... I was having a horrible writing day yesterday and feel this poem big time. The Hermes reference as has been mentioned is brilliant. Be Inspired Today! Love and Light, Sender
A perfect caption for the picture. One senses the past presence (passed present?) of people there.
I like this. Good writing.
hermes has gone missing….i like the atmosphere you create with your words dear bkm
Thoughts weeping from the wall and no Hermes to record them. Lovely imagery. That Hermes! He's probably showing someone around the Underworld.
Wonder who lived there once... Will they return? Ever? A very nicely done ambiguity here... Really enjoyed the read... the Hermes touch was brilliant!
Always enjoy your posts. Excellent craft and creativity
Very suggestive in its simplicity. Solid. - Bill
Awesome and very profound..loved the imagery my friend. Loved it.
Great poem. I just love the imagery in the beginning, "thoughts weep from the stone walls." Excellent.
Beautiful poem. And I feel like a broken record, but I really liked the Hermes reference. It was a thought provoking poem. Ok no I'm off to ponder the message of your poem. Until next week!
It's a bad day when the stone walls are having writer's blocknicely conveyedsorry I came yesterday and was unable to commentGreat One ShotMoon hugs
i think most people have picked up on "thoughts weep through stone walls" and the hermes reference..a very short piece that said so much and was written excellently..cheers and great to see you again at one shot..pete