Sunday, July 4, 2010

Twilight

i.

Loving magic; what I think to be
in words you 
gently speak to me
the silence,
 its sighs
Loving silence; what it seems to be
it sighs to me
with magic eyes
words

ii.

gilded twilight
holds you
still
life mirrors
forseen
 night; 
bathing day
immersing will
purifed in
gild..purified in
 gilded twilight


bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2010


posted for One Stop Wednesday click here and view the others...

18 comments:

  1. twilight is such a magical time , on the cusp between light and dark...

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  2. Thank you Rajesh and Brian for your visit and comments...bkm

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  3. beautiful images,
    well done!

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  4. "Loving magic; what I think to be
    in words you
    gently speak to me"

    Starts with a superb opening, just gets better. Nice!

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  5. such beauty in the words and the images portrayed... Heartspell

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  6. The language of love always a mystery. So beautifully conveyed in your words. I was spellbound

    thanks for helping us get One Shot Wednesday up and running

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  7. purified in gilded twilight.....beautiful words and love the blog..glad you have settled Pete

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  8. I love twilight as well and it always does something to my mood - feels like a blues all the time..and I love taking pictures then..and write words of big emotions. Nice to meet you!

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  9. Thank you all for your beautiful comments...glad to participate in One Shot Wednesday and meet so many new writers....bkm

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  10. nicely put... I'm not a fan of the "Twilight" series. so I was a little thrown off.

    but the emphasis on the state of limbo, between night and day, and the contrast of either side that's very interesting to me.

    I have to digest part "i" a little more tho... i can be slow like that.

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  11. Divisoria..not really written for the Twilight series....I do not follow it either....more for the view of love at Twilight...a lovely time of the day....thank you for your visit...bkm

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  12. Ahh.. magical!!! These Wow words and the great writing style in this poem brought back some lovely memories...and have made me appreciate that amazing phenomenon called 'twilight' all over again !
    Thanks bkm, for this awesome piece...

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  13. First, thank you so much for your visit and comment at my Word Garden. Please do visit any time the spirit moves. :-)

    I was surprised and delighted when I saw your header. It's beautiful.

    And the poem...I have read it three times and love the tone, but I am full of questions. I can't place the form, but I am not sharp on forms. But I think the poem is not finished speaking to me yet, so let me go listen....

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  14. thank you all for your beautiful comments....

    Fireblossom - I am not good on form either --- I just know the poetry pieces I have read and loved and throughtout the years - the form is what comes- I think if I tried to follow a specific form I would never write....blessings and thank you for adding me to your blogroll -- I am sure I will visit you again....bkm

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