Monday, June 28, 2010

Before Discontent

Before discontent
there was sarcastic laughter followed by smile,
coffee the mornings after; news without
headlines – before discontent
I could see promise in a winter day;
volumes written by candlelight,
fullfilment in a calendar of unplanned hours –

Before discontent
I did not notice – your becoming discontent
but all that was
before



bkmackenzie

9 comments:

  1. well said!
    loved your sharpness.

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  2. ouch. after can be a cold place to be...

    and i am in the 'in' crowd now...following you.

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  3. oh thanks Brian for visiting and following....best to you as always...bkm

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  4. thank you Jingle for stopping in...bkm

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  5. On target with this one. Excellent. Thank you, bkm!

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  6. thanks for stopping Musings...I am glad you liked it....bkm

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  7. Excellently written...I enjoyed this very much.

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  8. thank you Kelly, for your visit...I do love your site...bkm

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  9. Thanks for your comment. I love this one! Thanks again!

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