Before discontent
there was sarcastic laughter followed by smile,
coffee the mornings after; news without
headlines – before discontent
I could see promise in a winter day;
volumes written by candlelight,
fullfilment in a calendar of unplanned hours –
Before discontent
I did not notice – your becoming discontent
but all that was
before
bkmackenzie
well said!
ReplyDeleteloved your sharpness.
ouch. after can be a cold place to be...
ReplyDeleteand i am in the 'in' crowd now...following you.
oh thanks Brian for visiting and following....best to you as always...bkm
ReplyDeletethank you Jingle for stopping in...bkm
ReplyDeleteOn target with this one. Excellent. Thank you, bkm!
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping Musings...I am glad you liked it....bkm
ReplyDeleteExcellently written...I enjoyed this very much.
ReplyDeletethank you Kelly, for your visit...I do love your site...bkm
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment. I love this one! Thanks again!
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