because, i believe in chaos....
I love the terse lines which so perfectly capture the scene - a dissipating heat and longing for return of cooler days.
This is such a powerful form.
"caustic blaze / drains vital worth" perfect tropical summer...
Damn, I love this.
How WONDERFUL to see you in the Pantry, kiddo. YAY! Loved your poem, which captures midsummer so well.
This is gorgeous!
proof perfect that the less said the more imparted - each stanza a delight
Beautiful! What a perfect way to describe this summer heat and the glimpse of Fall.
Wonderfully captured in those brief lines...
Interesting and well done.ZQ
clever use of limited words, Love the following lines "a shallow crickbegs September"