Sunday, July 31, 2016

August


rib of wildflower 
what remains

caustic blaze
drains vital worth

lazy dog
cries August 

a shallow crick
begs September 



bkmackenzir
Copyright 2016. 

11 comments:

  1. I love the terse lines which so perfectly capture the scene - a dissipating heat and longing for return of cooler days.

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  2. "caustic blaze / drains vital worth" perfect tropical summer...

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  3. How WONDERFUL to see you in the Pantry, kiddo. YAY! Loved your poem, which captures midsummer so well.

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  4. proof perfect that the less said the more imparted - each stanza a delight

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  5. Beautiful! What a perfect way to describe this summer heat and the glimpse of Fall.

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  6. Wonderfully captured in those brief lines...

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  7. clever use of limited words, Love the following lines "a shallow crick
    begs September"

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