the camellias
have lost their head
announcing summer
not quit here
a rarer lace, a fairer
day
blossom holds the dew
not shade of
summer
but ending hue; and who
would guess
the clever cry
the trill, the sweetness
of its song
the toad, the hare
the zephyr air
to set recall; to quest upon
but earlier dreams
recollection, touch of
you
the lace, the trace heart
that comes
with spring, and turns
with summer a
distant blue
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2014
This is beautiful..so descriptive and emotive. I simply love the ending. Thanks for writing!
ReplyDeleteWelcome Susie I needed some inspiration that came in the form of lace...bkm
ReplyDeleteIt's so dreamlike and gentle. The first stanza is classically beautiful and the unfolding of the rest is magical.
ReplyDeletei love the lines "a rarer lace, a fairer "/ day"...
ReplyDeleteDelicate and gossamer as lace. The internal rhyming shimmers with gentle reflection.
ReplyDeleteThis has a haunting quality...something far off, and far away....something blue.
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful lyrical response to the prompt.Your phrasing and flow of lines makes for a wonderful reading experience.
ReplyDeleteYou give the seasons a voice....a beautiful voice....glad to see you back again Bkm. :-)
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful, Barbara, and so nice to come across you here!!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a like breath of fresh Spring air ...
ReplyDeleteI love the cadence & beautifully written verses ~ So lovely to read you again ~
ReplyDeleteLaced thoughts with sight and all changes in the garden. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem. Love the wistful dreamy quality that perfectly matches lace.
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