Wednesday, November 21, 2012

give thanks



i give thanks
in sepia, you in black
seasoned
construction for the ungrateful
on
plum blue days
we tend unrecognized by
design,  clouds of

feathers full that
fill my heart, i sleep there
would you too
sleep? .. there?

but.. what haste?  summons the bells
fed with furry, the porridge
of Adam, the sins
and the gravy
taste soon a season
gone shadowed
to dark - as i give thanks
in sepia

and you
in black

bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012

13 comments:

  1. i like the middle...the feather full clouds and would you sleep there...also the wrap around on the sepia and black...happy thanksgiving bk...

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  2. Well now, here's an original and intriguingly written departure from the usual Thanksgiving blog post stuff.

    I love the "plum blue days" and "the porridge of Adam, the sins of the gravy" and just the whole color duality you built the poem on.

    Happy Thanksgiving!

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  3. Thanks Shay Happy Thanksgiving nice yo here from you...bkm

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  4. love the plum blue days and giving thanks in sepia...happy thanksgiving bkm..

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  5. Barbara, you never fail to deliver the most exquisite images. So good. Happy Thanksgiving!

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    1. Thank you so much Victoria Happy Thanksgiving...bkm

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  6. So many facets of meaning compressed into this poem, Barbara, but that juxtaposition of sepia and black is brilliant.

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    1. Thank you Sam. Means much coming from you. ...bkm

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  7. Wonderful imagery! I love you use of color in this one.

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  8. Nicely in sepia connection Barbara! It's nostalgic! Happy Thanksgiving!

    Hank

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