do not cover the woods
like that, (I mean in paper) - parchment
comes soon enough; let life's
echo reprise in fern
and scarlet bird - still allow fresh the water its
cavoting of a vixen's den; its
course of shallow hollow
I can quill to stone,
do not cover the forest
with paper...print it to your
heart...
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2011
...and the animals--posing. Priceless!
ReplyDeletethank you Steve....bkm
ReplyDelete"...allow fresh the water its
ReplyDeletecavorting of a vixen's den; its
course of shallow hollow..."
Who but the TRUE POET might conjure such image with neither brush nor string-and-bow? Inspiring!
THANK you!
Thank you again Steve...that is a wonderful compliment and I take it to heart....blessings...bkm
ReplyDeleteI love it!!! If you have a twitter, please follow me (MsMatsui)
ReplyDeleteluxurious and creative; quill to parchment to writing in stone.
ReplyDeletejoanny
Our skin to parchment, mortality. Let's celebrate green vibrancy first! Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeletemagical...from the heart it came and so to return...
ReplyDeletevery creative use of words!! I like a lot!!
ReplyDeletethank you all...I have a fond love and memories of growing up among the trees....bkm
ReplyDeleteoh so beautiful I swooned
ReplyDeleteI love those kits
Oh, such beautiful language!
ReplyDelete"still allow fresh the water its
cavoting of a vixen's den; its
course of shallow hollow"
No, no parchment, nor paper either. Only the heart. Which has taken this in. Thank you for sharing this piece.
There's such a softness in the pleading of this poem, bkm, that I really love...
ReplyDelete"I can quill to stone,
ReplyDeletedo not cover the forest
with paper...print it to your
heart..." -
these words - their peace and beauty - will be with me as I head out this morning, as I walk the path to the lake.
bkm,
ReplyDeleteTrees are among my best of friends; to be enjoyed with eyes, nose, and fingers rather than words.
I love that peeping fox!
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Your lines did not give up all their depth and beauty straight away, but went on working after I thought I had switched off.
ReplyDeleteMiss the trees, but need the paper..
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, bkm, with some telling images of nature that just breathe life. It would indeed be a shame to put them under any kind of cover.
ReplyDeleteThat's really lovely, 'parchment comes soon enough'
ReplyDeleteoh, and not that is has anything to do with this poem, but, my initials are mkb, lol.
So beautifully expressed - and words to scribe on stone...
ReplyDeletemagically wonderful
ReplyDeleteyou are so skilled with words~