Monday, March 12, 2012

cradle

discovering
a cradle with a conjured value
was assurance
my fiefdom did exist

the moon's fullness
readies to birth a god (gender exposed)
all mothers expose
their young to a universe - label
our course yet quick to cover
our vital shame

to step into a dreams hole
is not always reversible - some(things)
must be approached, awake

aware

the culture of the day
is short lived,  its rotation loses worth
along the way
insinuating a dying, rethinking
beginning

a shadow holds its own
energies - released on its own accord
to fall into such madness
is a discovery of self proportions
able to fit
revealed into a cradle once
lost


bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2012

Posted for Magpie Tales
and for Open Link Night d'Verse



19 comments:

  1. You are an amazing writer ... IMJ anyways

    Still turning this over in mind

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  2. "Some things must be approached awake, aware"....so very true. This is another amazing write Bkm!!!

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  3. this is very good...nicely done and thanks for sharing your words

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  4. 'insinuating a dying, rethinking beginning' - I loved that phrase.

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  5. "The moon's fullness readies to birth a god."
    Ah yes, I've known nights like that...

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  6. thanks everyone for stopping in and commenting...bkm

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  7. Enjoyed this a lot Barbara! Especially:

    "to step into a dreams hole
    is not always reversible - some(things)
    must be approached, awake"

    Indeed, some(things)must be appraoched awake!

    Roger ☺

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  8. the culture of the day
    is short lived, its rotation loses worth
    along the way
    insinuating a dying, rethinking
    beginning

    that is a wicked stanza bk...the whole thing is fabulous but that one def spoke to me...

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  9. this is great bk...two parts i loved esp...

    to step into a dreams hole
    is not always reversible - some(things)
    must be approached, awake

    and the one bri mentions above..

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  10. I especially like the moon's fullness ready to birth a god...beautifully evocative...

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  11. Such a depth of feeling in "a cradle / once lost". The second to last stanza is stellar.

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  12. that 2nd stanza = wow! as a whole, it is a wonderful write...

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  13. You have a great touch for evoking mysterious realities that make what has been known so well all of a sudden weird, in the sense that it makes us more aware of ourselves in it. The following lines were very intriguing:

    to step into a dreams hole
    is not always reversible - some(things)
    must be approached, awake

    aware

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  14. You are one of the main reasons I keep coming back. You are amazing. Such emotions, visions, sounds, voice, talent. Glad, very glad I was able to stop by.

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  15. Such eloquence and imagery ... "a shadow holds its own energies" - indeed. Just lovely.


    http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.com/2012/03/fog-at-dusk-is-crowded.html

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  16. Lovely, favorite lines...to step into a dreams hole
    is not always reversible - some(things)
    must be approached, awake

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  17. "the culture of the day is short lived" is very poignant

    depth of field

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