Wednesday, June 5, 2019

there is truth in death




there is truth in death
be it a whale, a gull, a 
mother
blue and green and warm and
loving

she weeps and weeps
not unlike Our Lady of Sorrows
and yet we her blessed
her chosen
choke her in greed and
convenience
of polymers set
in colors or in clear

but what is 
clear is that 
there is truth in death
in suffocation
in the strangulation of a turtle
in the toxicity of
breast milk feeding the chosen

whatever you do
to the least of my people that you do unto me
unto me and my mother
for as she continues to give
until her last breath
one thing is clear
there is truth in death

and when she
takes her last breath
what can we ask ourselves

paper or plastic?

bkmackenzie 2019




30 comments:

  1. Perfect. Your poem brought tears to my eyes, right here: " whatever you do
    to the least of my people that you do unto me
    unto me and my mother . . ."
    Thank you!

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    1. Thank you Susan...did not mean to make you cry but maybe we all should be crying for what we are doing to this planet...bkm

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  2. Oh, punching and powerful! Such vivid images of suffocation and strangulation as we choke her in greed and convenience. I hope we don't wait until her last breath to choose wisely.

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    1. i hope we don't either...sad the youth of the world will inherit this problem...may we take a responsible place in doing our part...bkm

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  3. Consequences are far reaching and no matter how rich or influential we are there will be no escape.You reap what you sow and trying to squeeze through the eye of a needle is never going to work out.

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    1. Yes we are just beginning to pay for those consequences - the future will tell us very soon what we have sown...bkm

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  4. barbara,
    Indeed we have sinned with our inconsiderate and hopeless over-usage of poisons, plastics and all manner of caustic pollutants.
    Only now when the results are obvious, are we wondering if there is any time to reverse the damage...

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    1. i wonder how much time we have also...thank you..bkm

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  5. Beautifully written and so true. Here in Australia we have recently elected a government that believes in mining coal and turns a blind eye to climate change even though we see its effect on us already...money is so blind.

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    1. someday they will be able to turn their heads...but it might be to late..bkm

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  6. Powerful, a stark illustration of the "least" we do, which has such far-reaching consequences. Wonderful, Barbara.

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  7. Wow an amazing write and very powerful Love this "her chosen choke her in greed and convenience of polymers set in colors or in clear" So sad so true

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    1. it is true...thank you Marja for stopping in..bkm

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  8. How blind we are and still turning a blind eye to the problem killing our planet. The title that repeats in the poem pierces the heart. A very powerful write.

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    1. thank you much for Sumana for always leaving comments...bkm

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  9. This was excellent Barbara. Such sobering words and images culminating in the perfect question. Well conceived and written!

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  10. killer last line - punches the message through.

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  11. Great ending. A question they should ask at the pearl gates if there are any. The poignancy really pulled me in.

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  12. thank you Colleen..thanks for stopping by...kkm

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