the concert
left me baffled
and misunderstood
sitting in silent terms
of confinement and quandary
thought who
eats casserole for dinner
and melts fingerprints
to cigarette
i checked my lip for words
kissed closed
thought more room
for shapes and meatloaf plates
thought what about
a piece of Swiss
with the absence of rice paper
memory
then...
time to say goodbye
Bocelli and Brighton both warn
of change
and changelings present
thought
its time.... i'll leave one
more fingerprint
then pull out all stops and give the
left over fondue a good go
bkmackenzie
2016
left me baffled
and misunderstood
sitting in silent terms
of confinement and quandary
thought who
eats casserole for dinner
and melts fingerprints
to cigarette
i checked my lip for words
kissed closed
thought more room
for shapes and meatloaf plates
thought what about
a piece of Swiss
with the absence of rice paper
memory
then...
time to say goodbye
Bocelli and Brighton both warn
of change
and changelings present
thought
its time.... i'll leave one
more fingerprint
then pull out all stops and give the
left over fondue a good go
bkmackenzie
2016
Your words were already wonderful
ReplyDeletethen...
You threw in Bocelli and Brighton
Bravo!
thank you Martin. I do not know who you are but I do appreciate you reading my poetry and commenting...bkm
DeleteMartin's a member at Poets United, Barbara. I am late getting to you, happy to see you in the Pantry!! Yes, I was impressed with Bocelli and Brighton, too. Smiles. An interesting set of musings, between concerts and casseroles!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sherry...bkm
DeleteI really like the images you paint... the whole poem is full of those fingerprints... we do leave a trail where we have been don't we?
ReplyDeleteSuch an intersting take...a sorting of confusion. Casseroles and concerts...food and music, such pleasure.
ReplyDeleteThank You Annell, so nice to hear from you...bkm
DeleteYou have woven the diction of casserole and concert in a most unusual way. Such an interesting reading experience.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kerry, nice to hear from you...bkm
DeleteA triumph in making the everyday seem both a little surreal and by turns captivating..absolutely tuck in for some more!
ReplyDeletethank you Jae, I do like the surreal...bkm
DeleteYou painted a vivid picture here. Enjoyed it!
ReplyDeletethanks much Susan...bkm
DeleteInteresting juxtaposition. A fun read.
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