tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post6917266045959890275..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: Sanctuarysigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-65386087943674681852010-09-13T10:49:23.750-07:002010-09-13T10:49:23.750-07:00Very powerful and Intense- Like the ones I prefer ...Very powerful and Intense- Like the ones I prefer writing and reading.............. glad I came across.. very well written... :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-10424384642055858732010-08-09T09:50:23.350-07:002010-08-09T09:50:23.350-07:00Peaceful and beautiful...love it!
:-)Peaceful and beautiful...love it!<br />:-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-75533518226960380002010-08-08T06:07:29.715-07:002010-08-08T06:07:29.715-07:00Lovely bkm - as always. I feel myself breathing mo...Lovely bkm - as always. I feel myself breathing more slowly reading your poetry.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-60131189108157815732010-08-07T07:11:59.534-07:002010-08-07T07:11:59.534-07:00This is a beautiful poem. I particularly like the ...This is a beautiful poem. I particularly like the last stanza..<br /><br />'Lying nearer the dwelling place<br />Of ones who came before<br />I take the vow of not looking back<br />And close behind me sanctuary’s door'<br /><br />Lovely.Paul Andrew Russellhttp://www.paulandrewrussell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-72332728040544233402010-08-06T11:53:08.908-07:002010-08-06T11:53:08.908-07:00i like the idea of shutting the door, enclosing ou...i like the idea of shutting the door, enclosing ourselves in a safe place...Templeton's furyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07569680717037747033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-71189687047301303302010-08-06T08:10:18.504-07:002010-08-06T08:10:18.504-07:00Obviously you are a forest lover. Not sure about ...Obviously you are a forest lover. Not sure about the stepping stones, though. Seems like you are concerned about slipping on the moss! It always pays to be careful, and not look back. Excellent writing!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-9581290521651599562010-08-06T05:59:02.773-07:002010-08-06T05:59:02.773-07:00A beautiful poem and a wonderful photo accompanyin...A beautiful poem and a wonderful photo accompanying it! Makes me feel peaceful.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-49866961313550479592010-08-05T22:45:41.443-07:002010-08-05T22:45:41.443-07:00amazing words =P Thank for sharing!^^ A beautiful ...amazing words =P Thank for sharing!^^ A beautiful sanctuary is about to reveal=3Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-62754663143514934052010-08-05T14:21:12.569-07:002010-08-05T14:21:12.569-07:00I love how this sounds when read aloud:
>>&...I love how this sounds when read aloud:<br /><br />>>><br /><br />A well of life to feed the soul<br />Of those who bathe within its water<br />I cleanse the footprints I have left<br />Not stepping one stone further<br /><br />>>><br /><br />LOVELY on so many levels.<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/08/sanctuary-finds-me-thursday-think-tank-from-poets-united.html" rel="nofollow"> Read my think tank Thursday poem. </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-53026003060633110552010-08-05T14:00:38.878-07:002010-08-05T14:00:38.878-07:00Beautifully done! Amazing first stanza, the mood o...Beautifully done! Amazing first stanza, the mood of the poem is wonderful and captures the essence of the forest, of sanctuary, of stillness and peace, of the ancient stones....the photo perfectly illustrates the poem as well. I especially love "I cleanse the footprints I have left" and "the dwelling place of ones who came before." Lovely.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-8036685185431514962010-08-05T13:56:56.304-07:002010-08-05T13:56:56.304-07:00I love this line! Well done!
"I cleanse the ...I love this line! Well done!<br /><br />"I cleanse the footprints I have left<br />Not stepping one stone further"Serving Hugs on a Platter and Tears in a Teacuphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03184590044946798156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-74613396522822172592010-08-05T13:25:23.265-07:002010-08-05T13:25:23.265-07:00bkm,
I absolutely love this poem. It fulfills the ...bkm,<br />I absolutely love this poem. It fulfills the idea of 'sanctuary' perfectly.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-61876761869053897132010-08-05T10:28:26.642-07:002010-08-05T10:28:26.642-07:00A peaceful retreat in the woods, who could ask for...A peaceful retreat in the woods, who could ask for more? Great poem!rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-32827761399825414032010-08-05T08:51:05.459-07:002010-08-05T08:51:05.459-07:00This is a lovely read! Thank you for posting it a...This is a lovely read! Thank you for posting it at Poets United.brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-27828125934258897402010-07-09T04:28:13.819-07:002010-07-09T04:28:13.819-07:00"The lines that mark the forest heart
Reveal ..."The lines that mark the forest heart<br />Reveal a map to sanctuary" Very well done. Enjoyed the imagery, picture, and flow to the rhyme. thanksdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-24788973457893110232010-07-06T12:04:38.573-07:002010-07-06T12:04:38.573-07:00I would like nothing more than to visit such a pla...I would like nothing more than to visit such a place, lovely poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04537988518630912602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-9733920676132743782010-07-05T05:41:56.386-07:002010-07-05T05:41:56.386-07:00Very beautiful...sanctuary is a wonderful thing an...Very beautiful...sanctuary is a wonderful thing and even better if one can leave regret behind and not look back. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of your soul.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-36631130361415374122010-07-02T15:34:17.083-07:002010-07-02T15:34:17.083-07:00not looking back is the key to moving on... well d...not looking back is the key to moving on... well done, bkm! this is another beautiful piece from you. truly written from the soul. ;)Bing Yaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01562123246667338670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-73670377641328594462010-07-02T11:05:55.728-07:002010-07-02T11:05:55.728-07:00Thank you Trulyana and Kavisionz for your lovely c...Thank you Trulyana and Kavisionz for your lovely comments.....love the fact you read it out loud Ana...thanks...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-51602864157333843462010-07-02T10:40:08.090-07:002010-07-02T10:40:08.090-07:00This is such a beautiful poem of tribute, of wonde...This is such a beautiful poem of tribute, of wonder, of calm and of peace... loved the imagery and the picture you have used to reinforce your message...<br />Have a wonderful weekend!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-80628057552452299702010-07-02T04:50:29.354-07:002010-07-02T04:50:29.354-07:00That's a very beautiful poem, and so much insi...That's a very beautiful poem, and so much insight is gathered just by reading this out loud. I feel the serenity and the ancestors all colliding here. :)Trulyanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15630230706604318830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-11773052543583929772010-07-01T21:29:36.896-07:002010-07-01T21:29:36.896-07:00Thank you Dreamer....I am so glad you liked this p...Thank you Dreamer....I am so glad you liked this piece...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-16830476904708333062010-07-01T20:58:33.181-07:002010-07-01T20:58:33.181-07:00i'm not a big fan of rhyming because when you ...i'm not a big fan of rhyming because when you aren't a good writer it can come off as contrived and forced... but this really flowed elegantly.. great subtle piece..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-28850259164767979902010-07-01T19:20:09.495-07:002010-07-01T19:20:09.495-07:00Thanks to all who visited today..
Short Poems, Bj...Thanks to all who visited today..<br /><br />Short Poems, Bj, Ishabelle, Fiveloaf, Tracy and Emmanual....<br /><br />All you comments and visit mean so much....blessings...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-10467728783917509632010-07-01T15:49:42.640-07:002010-07-01T15:49:42.640-07:00This is really beautiful.
Short PoemsThis is really beautiful. <br /><a href="http://www.marinelareka.com/" rel="nofollow">Short Poems</a>M. Rekahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12178807956502786062noreply@blogger.com