tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post4150682223361185976..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: in the hand of a smaller morningsigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-15457308574582949352012-08-28T06:03:46.047-07:002012-08-28T06:03:46.047-07:00I know I can always find writing here that is orig...I know I can always find writing here that is original and deep. great imagery is always found in your work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-42059668174848964152012-07-26T19:53:02.445-07:002012-07-26T19:53:02.445-07:00Just such a perfect flow of words and feeling.Just such a perfect flow of words and feeling.Lorna Cahallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12119513840378599480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-48856151640871807742012-07-26T12:02:53.227-07:002012-07-26T12:02:53.227-07:00This is lovely...all of it. I am very fond of the ...This is lovely...all of it. I am very fond of the last stanza "wide (not) enough to hold thoughts...against the salver of the day." Powerful words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-51474377979997408992012-07-26T02:10:36.594-07:002012-07-26T02:10:36.594-07:00a beautiful day/feelinga beautiful day/feelinglucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-71620638872551823102012-07-25T23:51:28.535-07:002012-07-25T23:51:28.535-07:00As tender as the morn.As tender as the morn.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-18442587126190405832012-07-25T09:29:59.081-07:002012-07-25T09:29:59.081-07:00beautifully emotional!beautifully emotional!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-36936438749911950412012-07-25T09:28:08.316-07:002012-07-25T09:28:08.316-07:00Thank you so much for you time and comments...bles...Thank you so much for you time and comments...blessings..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-61829587403490759252012-07-24T22:40:56.109-07:002012-07-24T22:40:56.109-07:00A perfect little poem that perfumes a completely ...A perfect little poem that perfumes a completely overwhelming emotional experience.ninotazizhttp://www.ninotazizpurplemusings.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-29737193505836049462012-07-24T21:18:49.512-07:002012-07-24T21:18:49.512-07:00i agree the opening stanza is sublime
four child ...i agree the opening stanza is sublime<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/07/23/four-child-with-book-senryu/" rel="nofollow">four child with book senryu</a>zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-39474303288068028332012-07-24T15:57:45.318-07:002012-07-24T15:57:45.318-07:00My God, this is beautiful. The (not)s really got ...My God, this is beautiful. The (not)s really got to me. The opening is lovely and spanking white; the blue... the palette of not only colors, but emotions, so lovely. Thank you so much for this. Amy (dversed today, too!)<br />http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/07/24/real-women-dverse/Sharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-86235836379160476572012-07-24T15:12:58.093-07:002012-07-24T15:12:58.093-07:00In the hand of a smaller morning...know that line ...In the hand of a smaller morning...know that line is going to stick with me. Beautifully painted.nara malonehttp://www.naramalone.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-45545825106157449742012-07-24T13:19:34.730-07:002012-07-24T13:19:34.730-07:00exquisite...I too am enamored of the opening...bea...exquisite...I too am enamored of the opening...beautiful through to the end...just beautiful!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-82696879237137151002012-07-24T13:14:56.882-07:002012-07-24T13:14:56.882-07:00i like how your opening lines play off the widenes...i like how your opening lines play off the wideness, the blueness later...i think i would be rather taken as well...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-36083566160086461202012-07-24T12:49:42.931-07:002012-07-24T12:49:42.931-07:00how wonderful, you've captured delicate though...how wonderful, you've captured delicate thoughts for a quiet morning.lissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11012085842881252635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-74688597472292418442012-07-24T12:39:40.543-07:002012-07-24T12:39:40.543-07:00Gorgeous--sucked me in with the first image, and n...Gorgeous--sucked me in with the first image, and never let go.Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-40335906529144499162012-07-24T12:36:10.114-07:002012-07-24T12:36:10.114-07:00beautiful opening stanza.
lovely imagery throug...beautiful opening stanza. <br /><br />lovely imagery throughout...really enjoyed this.Christi Moonhttp://www.letterstothemoon.comnoreply@blogger.com