tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post2799553215062286582..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: a human cholerasigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-9944655860895744422012-03-24T22:48:13.795-07:002012-03-24T22:48:13.795-07:00Yes, we do have a social disease. Stark and distre...Yes, we do have a social disease. Stark and distressing imagery, seemingly simple, but so many layers (like the hope buried). Brilliant stuff. Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-49104522582553409682012-03-22T20:11:50.803-07:002012-03-22T20:11:50.803-07:00Left me a bit disturbed as usual, so you continue ...Left me a bit disturbed as usual, so you continue to do a good job at taking me places and making me think.<br /><br />I liked the whole fatherland / mother cut trek.<br /><br />Very evocative. And a touch otherworldly too.<br /><br />xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-52604029510173539782012-03-21T21:19:23.839-07:002012-03-21T21:19:23.839-07:00Carrie - thank you and I too Hope all is good and ...Carrie - thank you and I too Hope all is good and well with you...I do not get around as much as I used too ...you are for sure one of the sweetest there is out there...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-9451313374790659352012-03-21T21:18:00.879-07:002012-03-21T21:18:00.879-07:00Gay..thank you for you comments and words...I trul...Gay..thank you for you comments and words...I truly appreciate your thoughts and especially on a piece like this..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-90882792639727434022012-03-21T21:16:10.371-07:002012-03-21T21:16:10.371-07:00Thank you so much Neva..I always love your verse.....Thank you so much Neva..I always love your verse..and take to heart yours hearts and words....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-60711167560615911162012-03-21T20:50:56.953-07:002012-03-21T20:50:56.953-07:00What an artful, subtle protest. Your polished vers...What an artful, subtle protest. Your polished verse, always elegant, never fails to probe and exact deeper thought. Excellent.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-71576606676107837492012-03-21T16:51:06.845-07:002012-03-21T16:51:06.845-07:00Tess I actually wrote this before you photo - I fe...Tess I actually wrote this before you photo - I felt it really fit the piece...thank you..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-67965220345520407192012-03-21T16:48:19.630-07:002012-03-21T16:48:19.630-07:00Thanks Brian....I am glad you like it..bkmThanks Brian....I am glad you like it..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-4738492734083493592012-03-21T16:47:15.445-07:002012-03-21T16:47:15.445-07:00Thanks Kristen for your comments - I appreciate yo...Thanks Kristen for your comments - I appreciate you words and hope you enjoyed it...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-12417329645205200882012-03-21T16:45:24.146-07:002012-03-21T16:45:24.146-07:00Thank you Bar None - and thanks for stopping by..b...Thank you Bar None - and thanks for stopping by..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-79715814246485597412012-03-21T16:44:34.729-07:002012-03-21T16:44:34.729-07:00Thank You Steve - I always look forward to you com...Thank You Steve - I always look forward to you comments - thank you for making me a keeper....that means a lot to me...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-56812442146910654082012-03-21T14:55:35.878-07:002012-03-21T14:55:35.878-07:00Yours is a cautionary tale.Yours is a cautionary tale.Mark Butkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04028422696260495656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-13130744073015833422012-03-21T07:26:58.701-07:002012-03-21T07:26:58.701-07:00Such an intrepid piece of poetry. The images are c...Such an intrepid piece of poetry. The images are cutting edge, and the theme very on-point. Remarkable work.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-69962961275077738082012-03-21T06:01:37.492-07:002012-03-21T06:01:37.492-07:00An intelligent and perceptive poem with great imag...An intelligent and perceptive poem with great imagery and commendable economy of language.James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-56988662746729810752012-03-20T18:28:44.350-07:002012-03-20T18:28:44.350-07:00A simple shovel can dig a deep hole. I love your ...A simple shovel can dig a deep hole. I love your ease of presentation and depth of thought. Excellent.henryclemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2012/03/19/scarlet-stained-white-silk-scarves/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-52702423846947195092012-03-20T17:50:50.825-07:002012-03-20T17:50:50.825-07:00hope buried proves fertile...and our social diseas...hope buried proves fertile...and our social disease both great lines there toward the end in this bk...i likeBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-36151486944259697952012-03-20T16:04:46.801-07:002012-03-20T16:04:46.801-07:00Ya know bkm, I read lots of poetry I really don...Ya know bkm, I read lots of poetry I really don't like, just becoming aware of wasted time ..going to start weeding out some, but YOU are a 'keeper'.<br /><br />The first and last lines, philosophical, to me. Those thoughts which drip down from lines between answer the question, "How everything IS?"steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-60970404247444485502012-03-20T15:08:08.063-07:002012-03-20T15:08:08.063-07:00falls from
the ripened - hope buried
proves fertil...falls from<br />the ripened - hope buried<br />proves fertile<br />in the chaotic......what an incredible piece this is.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-19674738678479076952012-03-20T14:46:32.068-07:002012-03-20T14:46:32.068-07:00a social decease spreading indeed...i think there ...a social decease spreading indeed...i think there were various kinds of social deseases throughout history...some we were able to cure..others we're still suffering from and new ones breaking out all the time..fine write bk...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31634079470779190122012-03-20T08:56:31.167-07:002012-03-20T08:56:31.167-07:00"...a fatherland gropes a mother" really..."...a fatherland gropes a mother" really grabbed me...powerful...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-15730172862584101942012-03-20T08:44:46.589-07:002012-03-20T08:44:46.589-07:00Some amazing lines in this Bkm! "hope buried ...Some amazing lines in this Bkm! "hope buried proves fertile in the chaotic".....i love that line! Hope all is going well for you these days....always wonderful to see you at The Mag! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-7721551185256280232012-03-20T08:28:45.658-07:002012-03-20T08:28:45.658-07:00Hits that earthy spot this one does. Intensely sai...Hits that earthy spot this one does. Intensely said.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-5327046831774698112012-03-20T02:43:14.299-07:002012-03-20T02:43:14.299-07:00Wow this piece hits me hard. So much to think abou...Wow this piece hits me hard. So much to think about. Not to be taken lightly, either. I may have to read this again and again.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-62606991103565128962012-03-19T22:09:33.591-07:002012-03-19T22:09:33.591-07:00i had a dream my brother went to the coast to work...i had a dream my brother went to the coast to work and died of cholera. Ever wake up crying? strange coincidence.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18164471310146247950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-89927624815804174632012-03-19T18:44:09.095-07:002012-03-19T18:44:09.095-07:00Great news, the anti christ is exposed ! , that sh...Great news, the anti christ is exposed ! , that should take some of the wind from his sailsSilent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.com