tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post1713036227065091924..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: five reasonssigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-72088937515391884572011-11-05T13:44:57.959-07:002011-11-05T13:44:57.959-07:00This poem is so tactile and rich, yet carries me t...This poem is so tactile and rich, yet carries me through it lightly like a dream or a mind-drift during meditation. "Mosaic river" was a wonderful expression - wish I thought of that! Lovely piece, truly creative and inspiringAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-1834726810044373472011-11-03T08:11:50.907-07:002011-11-03T08:11:50.907-07:00this is an amazing piece.
the words are well chose...this is an amazing piece.<br />the words are well chosen and evoke complex and profound imagery.The Orange Treehttp://cooloceanwaves.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-75371972934723721942011-11-02T16:28:16.872-07:002011-11-02T16:28:16.872-07:00Drinking yellow, a red paisley bed, undressed note...Drinking yellow, a red paisley bed, undressed notes and buttoned down bodices so much color and great images. Love the feel over all.Joanne Young Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-75031349090549119112011-11-02T14:48:27.404-07:002011-11-02T14:48:27.404-07:00A very intricate, complex write. I love all the s...A very intricate, complex write. I love all the senses this poem appeals to. I could not choose a favorite stanza.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-29250116500047912352011-11-02T13:02:03.950-07:002011-11-02T13:02:03.950-07:00Agree with Anthony--each segment is self-supportin...Agree with Anthony--each segment is self-supporting--together they overwhelm the senses.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-26155895512570058202011-11-02T11:03:00.910-07:002011-11-02T11:03:00.910-07:00each stanza could stand alone as a great poem and ...each stanza could stand alone as a great poem and all together theyre just magnificent! I cant pick a fav one...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-69131943137853572222011-11-02T10:38:03.586-07:002011-11-02T10:38:03.586-07:00A strokable poem, all those linens and cashmeres, ...A strokable poem, all those linens and cashmeres, paisleys and licorice strings. There's a hypnotic recurrence of meter in iii's -- stones to my neck/tied to my boots/loves linen light/love cashmere skin/ comets attached /to notes undressed -- and that plus the aforementioned delicious licorice strings make this stanza a standout for me.Kathy Bischopinghttp://drinkthenewwine.blogspot.com/2011/05/occasional-table-dreaming.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-33748517291201514202011-11-01T12:09:50.544-07:002011-11-01T12:09:50.544-07:00love the images and I could get lost in your metap...love the images and I could get lost in your metaphors as always. hope you are well.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-32761593131426073212011-11-01T11:39:49.158-07:002011-11-01T11:39:49.158-07:00Beautiful reasons indeed...hope you had a wonderfu...Beautiful reasons indeed...hope you had a wonderful Halloween. :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-86126097689231702772011-11-01T10:52:10.682-07:002011-11-01T10:52:10.682-07:00I like your five reasons - very elegantI like your five reasons - very elegantIsabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-28086740060242416462011-10-31T10:31:21.980-07:002011-10-31T10:31:21.980-07:00Happy Halloween, Thanks for your strong support to...Happy Halloween, Thanks for your strong support to jingle Poetry Community,<br /><br />bless you, welcome back to us,<br />join our week 11 poetry picnic today. any poems are welcome.Jingle Poetry At Olive Gardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14591535202657302861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-29119804879693101392011-10-30T11:43:24.973-07:002011-10-30T11:43:24.973-07:00i like 5 the best because it involves math ;)i like 5 the best because it involves math ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-49452165100715935472011-10-30T10:03:30.683-07:002011-10-30T10:03:30.683-07:00Beautiful write, bkm....I love it. So drenched in ...Beautiful write, bkm....I love it. So drenched in color and atmosphere.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-75936840611263787892011-10-30T08:33:14.404-07:002011-10-30T08:33:14.404-07:00Hello.
Visiting from The Poetry Pantry
Some vivid...Hello.<br />Visiting from <a href="http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2011/10/poetry-pantry-is-now-open-73.html" rel="nofollow">The Poetry Pantry</a><br /><br />Some vivid images here.<br />I'm with Brian...it's 3 & 5 for me too.<br />Very nicely penned!<br />Thanks for sharing.<br /><br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/10/beautiful-winds-of-india.html" rel="nofollow">The Beautiful Winds Of India</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-15725229676030031812011-10-30T07:51:38.693-07:002011-10-30T07:51:38.693-07:00sweet and delicious piece.
visiting from poets un...sweet and delicious piece.<br /><br />visiting from poets united.<br />keep it up.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-86914125918731969382011-10-29T13:50:43.592-07:002011-10-29T13:50:43.592-07:00ha this has some ready neat textures...love the wh...ha this has some ready neat textures...love the whole thing bk...think i will take 3 and 5 though...smiles...you and me and place leaning left...ha...nice...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com