tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post8891961778080156967..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: My Other Soulsigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-23561240178518869032010-11-26T20:57:01.451-08:002010-11-26T20:57:01.451-08:00Dear BKM
Perfect... thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः श...Dear BKM<br /><br />Perfect... thanks for sharing..<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-6891322168579726412010-11-25T12:10:00.209-08:002010-11-25T12:10:00.209-08:00I bow to your depth and ability as a writer, this ...I bow to your depth and ability as a writer, this is heavy, rich and an amazing journey to take in. <br /><br />Thank you for your Thanksgiving blessing. Wishing you a wonderful day and beyond ~Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-89172297892104916842010-11-25T07:01:28.024-08:002010-11-25T07:01:28.024-08:00I really don't know about life from the south....I really don't know about life from the south.But your words made me feel like I do!<br /><br />I'm a gemini.I believe I have two of me.So two souls,I agree.<br /><br />Beautiful and Deep.One feels there is more than waht meets the eye as one reads on!June_Butterflyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17400867257051822555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-36712576838933867922010-11-24T19:00:00.498-08:002010-11-24T19:00:00.498-08:00Interesting how many directions this poem can take...Interesting how many directions this poem can take one in a reading.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-34779384343565772072010-11-24T18:51:00.871-08:002010-11-24T18:51:00.871-08:00This is fantastic. I always think highly of your w...This is fantastic. I always think highly of your work.Square Cornerhttp://thesquarecorner.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-37831656616572814162010-11-24T18:12:10.590-08:002010-11-24T18:12:10.590-08:00Beautiful work, BKM; and happy Thanksgiving to YOU...Beautiful work, BKM; and happy Thanksgiving to YOU too.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-84250958517825108212010-11-24T14:29:01.631-08:002010-11-24T14:29:01.631-08:00Outstanding write, beautiful poetry.
Cheers!Outstanding write, beautiful poetry.<br /><br />Cheers!Emmanuel Ibokhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-54661889302417998202010-11-24T12:36:33.931-08:002010-11-24T12:36:33.931-08:00Wow. Marvelous. Loved your whole metaphor here of...Wow. Marvelous. Loved your whole metaphor here of the two souls. Nicely done.Tinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08925730745204736744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-59881713913502071682010-11-24T12:04:28.987-08:002010-11-24T12:04:28.987-08:00..a railroad of thoughts ripped it apart..ouch - t.....a railroad of thoughts ripped it apart..ouch - that hurt...good to have more than one soul in that case...interesting thoughts in your poem..a strong writeClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-65694535776083798362010-11-24T11:08:36.265-08:002010-11-24T11:08:36.265-08:00Great images, references.Great images, references.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-9100047051129330492010-11-24T09:54:49.440-08:002010-11-24T09:54:49.440-08:00"in plain site" - clever! Nice shot, bk..."in plain site" - clever! Nice shot, bk!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-5768847804073707582010-11-24T08:35:46.512-08:002010-11-24T08:35:46.512-08:00Somehow my last comment turned into word mush. Her...Somehow my last comment turned into word mush. Here's what I was trying to say: You've burrowed deep here into the joining of human, cultural and geographic realities and what they make separately and together.Got something complex, new and important from all three of my re-readings. A very strong piece.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-62395891921126431512010-11-24T08:33:15.926-08:002010-11-24T08:33:15.926-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-82970247116783976562010-11-24T08:00:17.216-08:002010-11-24T08:00:17.216-08:00Your poetry evokes images of reconstruction, and t...Your poetry evokes images of reconstruction, and the brilliant literature that still holds me in awe whenever I revisit. Great work, bkmdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-75067486255776366052010-11-24T02:24:44.441-08:002010-11-24T02:24:44.441-08:00the south to me is something i have only ever seen...the south to me is something i have only ever seen in the movies...but fluid wonderful writes like this help me understand everything i have seen that much more....but this wasnt just about the south i could relate to this just for what it was...i kinda of felt a battle between head and heart<br /><br />Thanks for taking part in One Shot...all the best <br /><br />PeteOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-33963576835171253272010-11-23T23:33:21.487-08:002010-11-23T23:33:21.487-08:00"three fingers clinging to tracks
a railroad ..."three fingers clinging to tracks<br />a railroad of thoughts ripped it apart,<br />wings crushed, frayed" ..deep mournful sound. Liked it.M G Reignierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05400155919467043827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-62641420936954335922010-11-23T23:02:31.855-08:002010-11-23T23:02:31.855-08:00What a brilliant (soulful) poem! Loved it from beg...What a brilliant (soulful) poem! Loved it from beginning to end - the use of language, the imagery - too many lines to quote... but love this "my other soul - baptized<br />in a lone faith - of a Penn, a Faulkner"<br /><br />excellent write!Helena Malheurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12306591221090287590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-37151924784235164672010-11-23T22:59:34.782-08:002010-11-23T22:59:34.782-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Helena Malheurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12306591221090287590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-1557006191306925592010-11-23T21:12:39.282-08:002010-11-23T21:12:39.282-08:00I love this. The soul of the South never forsakes ...I love this. The soul of the South never forsakes the soul of the Nation. You poem really reflected the feeling of being torn for me.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-60781030463850666982010-11-23T21:00:25.939-08:002010-11-23T21:00:25.939-08:00Lots to think on in this piece. I liked "thre...Lots to think on in this piece. I liked "three fingers clinging to tracks", so specific and powerful, the other soul but barely hanging on...<br /><br />Happy Thanksgiving, bkm!dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-63969338090897954692010-11-23T20:25:04.648-08:002010-11-23T20:25:04.648-08:00Thanks for stopping by, Anthony, Teresa, Kathe, CR...Thanks for stopping by, Anthony, Teresa, Kathe, CRB and Suzi...your comments are appreciated and encouraging....blessings to all..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-63793405732010991882010-11-23T19:59:55.464-08:002010-11-23T19:59:55.464-08:00a railroad of thoughts ripped it apart-
great word...a railroad of thoughts ripped it apart-<br />great words!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-63092633450526185212010-11-23T18:54:13.281-08:002010-11-23T18:54:13.281-08:00Deeply soulful & romanticized vision of Appala...Deeply soulful & romanticized vision of Appalachia. Marvelous way of getting the sorrowful melancholia of the region into your narrative; very intense poem. Thanks for posting via 1SW, was glad when I saw your entry. take it easy,<br /><br />crb.Caribbean Foolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16211032750843178534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-13157596552166342212010-11-23T18:22:21.357-08:002010-11-23T18:22:21.357-08:00huzzah, glad to have discovered your writing.huzzah, glad to have discovered your writing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17807776658547638320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-16244659976467236412010-11-23T18:17:25.284-08:002010-11-23T18:17:25.284-08:00That was incredible and intriguing. :)That was incredible and intriguing. :)Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.com