tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post7110554061844212782..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: two wings alignsigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-61875459746989736682012-11-30T12:55:23.504-08:002012-11-30T12:55:23.504-08:00you are one of my favorite people...thank you..bkm...you are one of my favorite people...thank you..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-15880631938251246392012-05-15T15:31:52.251-07:002012-05-15T15:31:52.251-07:00i like can god hear the choir when the syllables d...i like can god hear the choir when the syllables divide. it's what music is all about, taking the vowels and stretching them out, turning words into beats beyond their natural beat. cool line.<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/03/17/radiation-rampage/" rel="nofollow">radiation rampage</a>zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-71925398725236860102012-05-03T23:10:16.688-07:002012-05-03T23:10:16.688-07:00This is the heart for me:
can? a fall be
remember...This is the heart for me:<br /><br />can? a fall be<br />remembered - a contraction<br />united - can? god's choir<br />hear voices - when syllables divide<br /><br />I agree with Henry Clemmons, you're one of my favorite living poets.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-20863317511328562872012-04-26T11:11:01.096-07:002012-04-26T11:11:01.096-07:00Sam I appreciate your feedback more then I can say...Sam I appreciate your feedback more then I can say. I do believe in art- writing or otherwise we have to pull from our internal hell and heaven life is beauty and chaos eternally new. Thank you my friend... bkm.signed...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-77468266932033637402012-04-26T06:33:35.954-07:002012-04-26T06:33:35.954-07:00Your poems always take me longer to read because t...Your poems always take me longer to read because there is always so much to absorb, so much to understand, and not just the surface. Here you weave religious symbology and with a personal expressionism, exploring pain, and the potential for redemption.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-56228995424851088972012-04-25T10:38:39.363-07:002012-04-25T10:38:39.363-07:00thank you Joy - you are a Master storyteller and s...thank you Joy - you are a Master storyteller and so appreciate your words...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-88070624931678242332012-04-25T10:38:03.483-07:002012-04-25T10:38:03.483-07:00thank you Bill I am happy to have met you here in ...thank you Bill I am happy to have met you here in blogland and appreciate so much your words...thanks also for addition to your listing..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-20736394180830858202012-04-25T10:18:31.518-07:002012-04-25T10:18:31.518-07:00Very intense portrait if alienation with hints of ...Very intense portrait if alienation with hints of the pressure of fate and Paradise Lost for us all--the internal rhyme is stellar.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-45144146057019348642012-04-25T07:07:04.366-07:002012-04-25T07:07:04.366-07:00This is truly beautiful as an expression of the pa...This is truly beautiful as an expression of the pain on the other side of man's warring, non-nurturing nature. But one does not have to battle, one only has to align the (thunderbird) wings.<br /><br />I do believe the feeling is so strong now because things are changing.<br /><br />P.S. - I subscribe to your beautiful poems but I think it's way-past-time to put you on my blogroll!WAShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10403669322174979974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-29252140421895024182012-04-24T19:18:49.007-07:002012-04-24T19:18:49.007-07:00Henry - you humble me and always look forward to y...Henry - you humble me and always look forward to your comments ...thank you for your words...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-53754816845070205232012-04-24T19:17:47.675-07:002012-04-24T19:17:47.675-07:00thank you Laurie - much appreciate your words .......thank you Laurie - much appreciate your words .....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-9111620942039871732012-04-24T19:16:39.022-07:002012-04-24T19:16:39.022-07:00Thank you Brian - it was intent to end with comfor...Thank you Brian - it was intent to end with comfort...glad you found it there at the end...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-13665769611047449872012-04-24T18:48:09.761-07:002012-04-24T18:48:09.761-07:00Great thread of poetic thought and presentation. ...Great thread of poetic thought and presentation. The beneath portal stanza read as my fav. But it is all top notch, as you always are. One of my favorite living poets.henry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2012/04/24/carole/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-89505437122118693852012-04-24T18:10:43.849-07:002012-04-24T18:10:43.849-07:00I have to say ditto to Brian... that part really j...I have to say ditto to Brian... that part really jumped out at me, although the whole piece is amazing.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-39303579343014033672012-04-24T14:32:47.863-07:002012-04-24T14:32:47.863-07:00i become the dream
and the liar
joined in vowels a...i become the dream<br />and the liar<br />joined in vowels and god's holy choir<br />i am word<br />set to fire - two wings<br /><br />align - give way<br /><br />is my fav part and the very next verse as well...really wicked flow through there bk....oddly enought he return to the two wings aligning brings comfort to me...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com