tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post6284691122785989117..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: from lemons to luck ...continued.....Part IIIsigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-82035924973958512732011-03-18T22:52:15.276-07:002011-03-18T22:52:15.276-07:00I had to go back and catch up. Great tension! An...I had to go back and catch up. Great tension! And thanks for a happy ending...so far.~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-30058107173427310042011-03-18T00:31:35.371-07:002011-03-18T00:31:35.371-07:00Whhhewww.. that solved the mystery.. I was sitting...Whhhewww.. that solved the mystery.. I was sitting with my fingers crossed hoping it wasn't Devon.. <br /><br />Poor girl though!! <br /><br />Very well written, Barbara.. so engaging!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-12433140146792843382011-03-17T19:09:37.227-07:002011-03-17T19:09:37.227-07:00cover up for a murder?
friendship, love, and gui...cover up for a murder?<br /><br /> friendship, love, and guilt are mixed here...<br /><br />mind blowing plots, fabulous magpie.Jinglehttp://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-1703648929571763412011-03-17T16:33:23.136-07:002011-03-17T16:33:23.136-07:00Immediately involving work, great stuff. Would lo...Immediately involving work, great stuff. Would love to read your work on one of my site sometime (e.g., http://readingbypublight.blogspot.com/2011/03/3-word-week-2-barcelona-honeymoon.html).<br /><br />Anyhoot-hoot, said the owl, later, gator (who leapt from the river and ate the owl).Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-417173018290343912011-03-17T09:07:27.531-07:002011-03-17T09:07:27.531-07:00You are quite the story teller Bkm!....You are tal...You are quite the story teller Bkm!....You are talented in so many ways...hope all is going well for you. :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-32287548704733703752011-03-16T17:56:04.338-07:002011-03-16T17:56:04.338-07:00Ho! Lots of tension, kept me rivetted right to the...Ho! Lots of tension, kept me rivetted right to the end:) Good work.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-17463819804565727032011-03-16T10:54:24.180-07:002011-03-16T10:54:24.180-07:00wow!
This ended at a different and a pleasant not...wow!<br /><br />This ended at a different and a pleasant note :)<br />Very refreshing and yes.. amazingly well done!<br /><br />Loved the story- the complete one.. I had been checking since over 24 hrs to see you link in- haha<br /><br />Hugs xxxxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-60087912037639486322011-03-16T08:16:36.234-07:002011-03-16T08:16:36.234-07:00Wow,I like how your story evolved over time. Enjoy...Wow,I like how your story evolved over time. Enjoyable characters.Everyday Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00486528297252417282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31554300225854517012011-03-16T07:45:24.618-07:002011-03-16T07:45:24.618-07:00I think this episode would be improved by linking ...I think this episode would be improved by linking to the previous ones, rather than by using the extensive flashbacks in the past perfect tense of your first few paragraphs. BUt it's nevertheless a good story.Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-87542190291648986122011-03-16T03:15:24.469-07:002011-03-16T03:15:24.469-07:00Great ending. I enjoyed this, B. Well done.Great ending. I enjoyed this, B. Well done.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-59452723605086849912011-03-15T20:26:21.392-07:002011-03-15T20:26:21.392-07:00What a story! You had me captured through the whol...What a story! You had me captured through the whole story, Gosh you are going to continue, right? :)Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-36050333867441982432011-03-15T18:31:03.948-07:002011-03-15T18:31:03.948-07:00Gosh, I read it all wrong--I saw a sequel in which...Gosh, I read it all wrong--I saw a sequel in which Devon has to kill Chrissy, because the blood on the computer IS Devon's, mixed with the blood of "that girl"...<br /><br />Somehow Chrissy scratched Devon during the struggle, and his tissue and blood was under her nails...etc., etc.<br /><br />Guess my thinker is working overtime tonight.<br /><br />What a GoooD story , and you told it well! Thanks!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-81688296509374368552011-03-15T17:45:45.302-07:002011-03-15T17:45:45.302-07:00Well, I guess I am too cynical these days. Watched...Well, I guess I am too cynical these days. Watched too many gory stories of betrayal on TV. What a nice ending. Still, I wonder what the statistics are .... Thanks for tying up the loose ends.Sharihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13842711799199331211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-76526612198884888032011-03-15T16:29:56.700-07:002011-03-15T16:29:56.700-07:00Well that took a different than expected turn. Wel...Well that took a different than expected turn. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-48578979690065913102011-03-15T16:24:23.531-07:002011-03-15T16:24:23.531-07:00Thank you I wanted this to end going a totally dif...Thank you I wanted this to end going a totally different direction...from the first two...hope I accomplished that...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-50579181450894073452011-03-15T16:19:03.510-07:002011-03-15T16:19:03.510-07:00as much as i love your poetry i have really enjoye...as much as i love your poetry i have really enjoyed the change of venue in your short stories...your poet still shines through...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-70209008338908415022011-03-15T16:09:28.695-07:002011-03-15T16:09:28.695-07:00This has been a fun read - nicely done...This has been a fun read - nicely done...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.com