tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post5916649279147266595..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: In Writingsigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-25914082209625181952010-07-21T15:27:53.978-07:002010-07-21T15:27:53.978-07:00excellently written, my friend! loved it!
http://m...excellently written, my friend! loved it!<br />http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-11456605748521131882010-07-18T03:31:28.644-07:002010-07-18T03:31:28.644-07:00Powerful. Brings to mind Dylan Thomas "In my ...Powerful. Brings to mind Dylan Thomas "In my Craft or Sullen Art". Love: without the two buck toll<br />to pay the greedy gatekeeper<br />at the entrance to my soulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-62515990850550480302010-07-15T06:24:44.951-07:002010-07-15T06:24:44.951-07:00beautiful.
smiles,beautiful.<br /><br />smiles,Jessiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11173809658342411265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-23982466488656607592010-07-15T02:00:00.960-07:002010-07-15T02:00:00.960-07:00WOW, A five star poem..... wonderfully written yo...WOW, A five star poem..... wonderfully written you have command of the English Language and use it eloquently.<br /><br />Joanny<br /><br />came by one shot poetryjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-44156147134857471262010-07-14T18:27:03.760-07:002010-07-14T18:27:03.760-07:00wonderfully brilliant imagery and flow. I thought...wonderfully brilliant imagery and flow. I thought this was marvelous :)Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-6305590713978509352010-07-14T16:53:38.856-07:002010-07-14T16:53:38.856-07:00I love “ink just laughing everywhere.” I so often ...I love “ink just laughing everywhere.” I so often feel that way – my own writing is laughing at me. Maybe I got it right, but usually I couldn’t quite get to the heart of what I was trying to write – either way, I feel mocked by my own writing!The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-29108127937647480622010-07-14T15:02:21.091-07:002010-07-14T15:02:21.091-07:00Oh, I love this. The flow and imagery so perfectly...Oh, I love this. The flow and imagery so perfectly describes the writer's journey to within. For most, it's not an easy trip.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-69725881793384955632010-07-14T11:45:49.388-07:002010-07-14T11:45:49.388-07:00wow...that all but it bears repeating WOW!wow...that all but it bears repeating WOW!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-78958754426475788762010-07-14T11:23:07.487-07:002010-07-14T11:23:07.487-07:00Thanks, Thanks and more thanks to everyone, the in...Thanks, Thanks and more thanks to everyone, the indents Divisoria are only for texture you might say, a visual effect of its contridictions...blessings to everyone..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-80109461873744059532010-07-14T11:11:21.462-07:002010-07-14T11:11:21.462-07:00"without the two buck toll
to pay the greedy ..."without the two buck toll<br />to pay the greedy gatekeeper" - WOW!!! After reading these lines, it took me a few minutes to get to the subsequent lines.. Cuz I was thinking..REAL HARD!<br />The images one sees within one's heart are so fascinating... and so contradictory to one another! And yet, they are all true..each one of them!<br />Wow!!! I totally bow to you, and to this poem... Amazingly well-written!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-41753524173935406912010-07-14T11:04:47.142-07:002010-07-14T11:04:47.142-07:00I love how surreal it is and how the shape of the ...I love how surreal it is and how the shape of the poem reflects the spiral staircase in the picture.<br /><br />I haven't made sense of why the lines were indented though... help?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-41348742694140173072010-07-14T10:58:41.152-07:002010-07-14T10:58:41.152-07:00what to say !!! today is my lucky day i guess .. o...what to say !!! today is my lucky day i guess .. one after another brilliant poems ! this was almost the icing on cake :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-66637885178460387792010-07-14T10:27:30.736-07:002010-07-14T10:27:30.736-07:00...ink just laughing everywhere .. soo good!...ink just laughing everywhere .. soo good!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-35637276082075210422010-07-14T09:29:46.419-07:002010-07-14T09:29:46.419-07:00Thank you all for your wonderful comments - a grea...Thank you all for your wonderful comments - a great blessing to be greeted with this morning and feast on along with my morning coffee...<br /><br />I appreciate One Shot Wednesday and all the hosts at One Shot for all their work in pulling this site together for the rest of us to share our work..<br /><br />Pete...Thank you so much for your words...I like that line too...bkm<br /><br />Dustus...Thank you and the allusions...yes, allusions...bkm<br /><br />Everyone have a great day...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-74143417202455172712010-07-14T06:33:37.916-07:002010-07-14T06:33:37.916-07:00Loved this poem. "ascending upward / to the u...Loved this poem. "ascending upward / to the underground" It's this type of complex, contradictory line: movement simultaneously up and down. Great depth and gut-level depiction to the allusions as well.<br />cheersAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-46884511936470344912010-07-14T01:14:56.660-07:002010-07-14T01:14:56.660-07:00Hi ya BKM...this was a fantastic share that has gr...Hi ya BKM...this was a fantastic share that has graced my screen today....there are so many great stanza's and lines to chose from that i would quite happily use myself!!..my favourite..but a virgin in a breadbox...excellent work..cheers PeteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-19657213985857836342010-07-13T22:22:35.136-07:002010-07-13T22:22:35.136-07:00I absolutely loved the last two lines. I liked th...I absolutely loved the last two lines. I liked the whole thing, but those two lines make me smile because, regardless of everything, a writer loves to write.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-22555703711496191402010-07-13T20:42:47.193-07:002010-07-13T20:42:47.193-07:00Beautiful poem...still mulling it over.Beautiful poem...still mulling it over.Lindahttp://roses2rainbows.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-12165956276398510502010-07-13T19:12:45.972-07:002010-07-13T19:12:45.972-07:00One word..."Wow"One word..."Wow"Emmanuel Ibokhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-90962489898319881522010-07-13T18:13:01.961-07:002010-07-13T18:13:01.961-07:00Everyone, thank you, thank you and thank you... pl...Everyone, thank you, thank you and thank you... pleased you each have drawn something from this piece - will make the rounds and visit everyone...blessings...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-11770299013542537332010-07-13T17:50:06.866-07:002010-07-13T17:50:06.866-07:00This is a One Stop that should be put into discuss...This is a One Stop that should be put into discussion to see how each interprets then to hear your own thoughts as the author. I just love it.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-69633329328047991992010-07-13T16:25:21.958-07:002010-07-13T16:25:21.958-07:00A beautifully wrought poem. You should be proud of...A beautifully wrought poem. You should be proud of it. Thank you so much for sharing.Kira Stannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07085044018165228069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-39488724944299268232010-07-13T15:36:23.751-07:002010-07-13T15:36:23.751-07:00This is so marvellously surreal. Meanings hidden i...This is so marvellously surreal. Meanings hidden in meanings hidden in ...anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-86219085623800662232010-07-13T15:34:50.981-07:002010-07-13T15:34:50.981-07:00The rich material and the gorgeous metrics make th...The rich material and the gorgeous metrics make this quite stellar. I like the virgin in the breadbox and Jesus in the junkyard . . . well all of it very much.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-69202160442419496892010-07-13T15:34:50.982-07:002010-07-13T15:34:50.982-07:00You've really got some beautiful material in t...You've really got some beautiful material in this poem, and gorgeous meter and rhythm. Love Jesus in the Junkyard . . . well all of it.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.com